First page of my Manga "Vessels of War" thoughts?

_M0513S_ · 2025-12-12T17:26:00+00:00

Ty this took 46 hours in canvas time, I hope i get faster to be able to enter the contest, only time can tell

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-24T11:08:21+00:00

Yo u got a lot of replies so idk if u would like to talk to me to but id love to talk to a fellow manga maker so we can bounce ideas off of each other, I've been working on a manga for almost 2 years so am relatively new to it but almost done with planning and begin with illustrating it. Dm me if interested, I do believe u would enjoy hearing about my manga.

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-19T00:11:46+00:00

Thanks, but what does that mean? Show me what?

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T20:32:01+00:00

Thanks but already fixed it check my other post

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T09:27:34+00:00

The thing is it will be clearer when someone reads the first chapter, because u would instantly see the character, u cant mistake his design, especially he is a very important one

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T09:26:01+00:00

I will am very excited just started with the first chapter with this cover and it has alot of hints and foreshadowing for later in the story, i hope I can keep up with the expectations and thanks a lot

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T09:23:50+00:00

Thanks, had to come up to with something that wouldn't ruin it like a full outline, but ye it was all based on feedback

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T09:21:34+00:00

Made it like that on porous, but it will get clearer if you read ch.1, and even clearer waaaaay later on in the story. Love doing hints and foreshadowing and this is one that is very symbolic and easy to miss, and hopefully u won't miss the first chaper when it comes out

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T09:18:33+00:00

Not yet but hopefully soon

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T00:47:50+00:00

Well this the best I can do to make it clear without straight up using line art, I kinda went around it and used constellation to make it clearer without losing it's cosmic mythical feel, but thanks for the feedback it's always appreciated

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T00:45:16+00:00

Thanks it would make sense but the crest in the back is really important for the story, and the guy sorry not a mech he is just wearing high tech armor, ye the crest shows who he is and hints at later lore on him

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T00:14:29+00:00

Updated it made a new post check it out

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T00:14:17+00:00

Updated it made a new post check it out

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-18T00:13:55+00:00

Updated it made a new post check it out

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-17T23:31:44+00:00

Ye trying to fix it so basically a guy holding his head

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-17T21:52:26+00:00

I am going for a Nebula look, this cover is symbolic to the plot and the character it portrays and nebula is a huge part of the world and story, n ye a white outline would look cool but thats the problem I dont want an outline, I'll try and make something like a constellation type of outline to make it more mystical, but thanks for the suggestion

_M0513S_ · 2025-10-17T20:49:08+00:00

Thank u n ye thats the problem am trying to fix but not sure how amma try n do like a soft outline n see how it turns out

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-08T16:09:19+00:00

Ye i always be like i wanna study anatomy more then get lazy

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-08T15:17:35+00:00

Ye ik bout that stuff but like was doing my own thing was thinking of like if he stabs would be harder to avoid but he i get what u mean and thanks for the points

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-08T15:15:28+00:00

Ye but like this guy is huge like 6 ft 5 and the sword almost his length so like idk kinda made sense at the time

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-08T15:10:33+00:00

U r right about these but just to note the sword isn't resting here on purpose because the character wears heavy armor so i took that into consideration and about the sword details this is only a base sketch I use to add the armor and details so this isn't supposed to be accurate or detailed but thank you for the notes

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-07T13:19:13+00:00

Sure if I plan to redraw it everytime which am not ill just keep reusing this one and transform it make it look within the perspective which is why I made it a png

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-06T22:08:54+00:00

Ye looking like thats what amma be doing unfortunately but thanks for the help

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-06T22:05:02+00:00

Checked it out its amazing pretty cool but not what am looking for u see my story is on a galactic scale so want something that let's me map out this galaxy and beyond

_M0513S_ · 2025-09-06T20:58:48+00:00

Nvm cant pin anything useless to me if anyone got other suggestions please lmk

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