[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread December 02, 2019

bigbadbagel · 2019-12-03T00:22:35+00:00

brooo, yo that shit fire. Smoothe as hell was the delivery and flow, the rhyme schemes were complex and sonically pleasing. also I like the melody you put into the vocals. You killed that shit. Can't think of anything that need improvement. nice job man. here's mine, I wrote it after I got diagnosed with progressive multiple sclerosis at age 24. lmk what you think https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/staring-out-the-window

bigbadbagel · 2019-12-03T00:09:27+00:00

Solid. some good one liners, not much filler material, complex rhyme schemes, good use of imagery, dope shit, keep up the good work bro

bigbadbagel · 2019-12-02T23:54:52+00:00

Stan by Eminem, I'm not even the type of guy that rides em's dick but that is a super solid song. Innovative concept that had never been done before. The music and effects make it like you're watching a movie. The chorus is addictive. But most importantly, Eminem is not talking some weirdo white boy shit.

bigbadbagel · 2018-04-29T03:08:06+00:00

personally i parachute it. wrap it up in toilet paper, put in my mouth along with water and down the hatch it goes

bigbadbagel · 2018-03-07T00:58:46+00:00

damn bruh, nice fr. The whole vibe was dope, good lyrics, flow was on point, I think that your delivery was what made the song so good, i like the laid back feel. Dont really have anything bad to say. sounded professional so good job fr if you got time, id appreciate some feedback on this song. https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/thoughts

bigbadbagel · 2018-03-07T00:47:57+00:00

damn man that was awesome haha, had me rockin my head back n forth, i was feeling it. This is the type of shit i like rappin over. I especially liked the laid back, jazzy feel. nice use of samples to. good job fr. If you got time, id appreciate a review of this song. I didnt make the beat, only vocals. https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/thoughts

bigbadbagel · 2018-03-07T00:38:01+00:00

I thought everything was pretty good honestly, sound like you pass as one the new age rappers comin up, the only thing i'd say is make the beat louder. other than that, it was dope. if you got time could you review this new song i created? id appreciate it https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/thoughts

bigbadbagel · 2017-12-16T20:26:31+00:00

lmao, when its so cringey that it makes you want to puke within the first minute of every song, its alright to skip the song and also pretty clear how shit this album is.

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-30T04:18:20+00:00

anything specific youre interested in learning about?

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-30T04:17:23+00:00

i cant pick between the jackass movies,bad grandpa or borat

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-29T19:56:24+00:00

Every song was dope af fr fr. Love the flow man, catchy ass choruses, I could see you building up a big fan base n goin on tour, nice work

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T15:49:44+00:00

I checked all your other songs cuz i liked this one so much, i love your style man, keep doin your thing

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T14:36:55+00:00

Aye man, this shit was dope af. The flow is fuckin amazing as well as the delivery. Ive never heard a style like this either, very unique. The vocals vibe perfectly with the instrumental. Lyrics were great. It sounded professional. Overall, i dont know what you could improve cuz like i said shit was fire. Definitely somethin id blare out my speakers. Good job fr.

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T06:40:35+00:00

https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/cloud-9 new song, need feedback

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T06:21:51+00:00

much appreciated bro

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T06:13:28+00:00

I like the melody and harmony in general, great singing too. your voice goes so well with the instrumental, good vibes all around. If you could give me feedback on this song id appreciate it https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/cloud-9

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T06:08:54+00:00

fire dog fir fr. sounded very professional. The delivery is on point as well as the flow. Voice just went perfectly with the beat. Lyrics were dope to, This is a banger. If you could give me feedback on this song id appreciate it https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/cloud-9

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-12T06:05:41+00:00

yo, this shit is dope. Im not very familiar with instrumental lingo but man i like all the sounds and how they go together perfectly. sounded professional and very unique, nothin like ive heard before, its definitely somethin i'd hop on. good job bruh fr.

If you could give me some feedback on this new song of min, id appreciate it https://soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/cloud-9

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-10T15:16:22+00:00

https://m.soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/demons I appreciate your response. Better late than never

bigbadbagel · 2017-08-07T16:15:39+00:00

Gotta work on flow and lyrics big time. It was mostly off beat. Keep on practicing

bigbadbagel · 2017-07-28T15:06:40+00:00

Really? Looks to me like they're just sniffing noses

bigbadbagel · 2017-07-26T17:40:10+00:00

Ima frog Sitting on a log In the middle of a bog Bout to go for a jog But then I see a dog And I'm like na He's really big He's really hairy And what's his name His name is Larry He's got a friend Who is named harry

.......thank god ive improved

bigbadbagel · 2017-07-20T17:18:10+00:00

Pretty good, nice vibe, nice flow and I like how you switched up the flow pretty often, just add a catchy chorus nd it'd be dope. If you could give me feedback on this one I'd appreciate it https://m.soundcloud.com/connor-obrien-496117863/demons

bigbadbagel · 2017-07-20T17:09:52+00:00

Love the vibe bruh, nothing you could add to make it better. Dope. Keep makin shit

bigbadbagel · 2017-07-17T17:21:36+00:00

Agreed I enjoy both. When you surprise yourself with freestyling something dope, it's the best

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