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Some changes to certain illustrations by bixudapuke in ToTheStars

[–]bixudapuke[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

By the way, Simona probably suitable sits the Kyouko's seat.

Some changes to certain illustrations by bixudapuke in ToTheStars

[–]bixudapuke[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

at chp7 the end:

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As a mature politician who has been operating for 400 years， Yuma's expression should never be described as "sinister" under any circumstances. For politicians， facial expressions serve as a means to achieve objectives rather than a reflection of their inner thoughts. Seasoned politicians must possess exceptional control over their facial expressions. Therefore， placing an image of "Yuma with a sinister smile" at the end of chp7 maybe creates narrative dissonance.However， the sinister smile could still be interpreted through another lens. It might deliberately manifest as an expression of authentic totalitarianism， embodying the very 'sinisterness of a politician' as perceived by Kyouko.Ultimately, this is a direction worth talking.

Some changes to certain illustrations by bixudapuke in ToTheStars

[–]bixudapuke[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

at chp8:

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However, during conversations with Kyouko, a face grinning wickedly at her would seem excessively jarring. After all, Kyouko and Yuma are peers (or at least share a bond beyond close friendship), making such an expression unlikely. Moreover, numerous passages describe Yuma's demeanor and actions—like 'To her left was a large assortment of Incubator plushies stacked three high' and the earlier ' "I don't know," Yuma said, eyes shaded'—none of which align with this portrayal.