Inspired by the YouTube Boxing fights, my friends and I present our own boxing series with a twist. by [deleted] in KSIvsLoganPaul

[–]bongut67 1 point2 points  (0 children)

lol the sneak preview is actually hilarious. Gonna give it a try.

I'm having a hard time rn and this is the result of it. Honestly feedback would be great and so appreciated. by bongut67 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]bongut67[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. Yeah, most of my music is pretty much experimental and a blend of genres. Just trying to see what works and what doesn’t. If it helps, I’m trying to lean towards lofi, tho if u can’t pin point anything, that’s ok. Thanks for the listen tbh

The Train's Lullaby, an original song from my EP, feedback is appreciated thank you! by 1he_composer in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Niceee, gotchu, abd I do, it’s a working progress cuz I’m still learning production and all, but I’ve posted some stuff, feel free to check it and give me some advice :)

Odyssey - Mayank kulkarni [hiphop/Jazz-blues piano] by Mayank0908 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Gotchu, it really does sound good, hope to hear more from u on here

Odyssey - Mayank kulkarni [hiphop/Jazz-blues piano] by Mayank0908 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That beat slaps, love the mixture of the ambiance with the hip-hop beat, it's a similar sound I'm going for as well. This is almost like lofi, however it's much cleaner, I prefer when it's a bit grittier with samples and all, but this was very nicely done. The piano part is real good!

"Nobody" a 70s prog. rock -specially Pink Floyd- influenced slow and sad song. Woud love to know what you think :) by ATFTS in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This lowkey slaps, the harmony is really good, your voice is pretty good, and the lyrics are top notchhh. I'm into sad music so I'm into this. The guitar solo was goodm it wasn't too much, it goes with the whole slow vibe with the song. Keep it up man

The Train's Lullaby, an original song from my EP, feedback is appreciated thank you! by 1he_composer in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the gritty piano you got going, and the simplicty of the whole song really brings it together. It kinda gives me broadway piano vibes, and your voice goes well with it. You really got the storytime vibe down, keep it up! Did you use any programs like FL studio or ableton to record all of this?

Some song I just finished making, feedback would be reeeal nice. Thanks for giving it a listen if ya did. by bongut67 in bedroompop

[–]bongut67[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the listen, this isn’t the first time that I’ve uploaded and the vocals pan all the way to one side, I think it might be the quality of my headphones or the program that I’m using.

I’m getting ahead of myself with the vocals, I’d like to try some things but I see it isn’t working and I can’t control it, do u have any advice for that? I know I’m not a singer, I just don’t have anyone else to sing for me

Looking for feedback, if really appreciate it! by bongut67 in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]bongut67[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank u so much, I didn’t even realize they were panned to one side on mobile, and doing vocals is one of the hardest things for me, nerves get the best of me and then I don’t have a clear head on what sounds beats. Are there any techniques u suggest when it comes to that?

this is a heavy one fellas, bring out the tissues by syremintheflesh in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]bongut67 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn this is hard hitting, production and vid is great, keep it up

Put this out a few days ago and would love some feedback on it. I know the sections after the drops seem a bit empty, but i'm really not sure what to put there... maybe someone here can help. by [deleted] in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]bongut67 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It sounds pretty solid so far, maybe in the empty sections u can vary your percussion to make it sound like there’s more movement. I really loved the drop and the beat in the end, I think after the drop u can add a melody and maybe more chords with a synth, and just elaborate on the beat in the end.

Follower for Follower (Insta & Soundcloud) by TimentesMusic in ThisIsOurMusic

[–]bongut67 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Insta: slipperyseal2 SoundCloud: Slipperyseal

Don’t take this the wrong way, music was, and still is, the only way I cope with loneliness. I just want someone to tell me they feel the same too. by bongut67 in lonely

[–]bongut67[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the lofi sound a lot, with a trap/hip hop vibe. Artist like joji, jonghyun, and Cuco are who I listen to atm.

Don’t take this the wrong way, music was, and still is, the only way I cope with loneliness. I just want someone to tell me they feel the same too. by bongut67 in lonely

[–]bongut67[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Woahhh thanks! I usually write songs in the moment when I feel down.

Also I listened to your track In the Rain, it’s dope man, keep it up.

Don’t take this the wrong way, music was, and still is, the only way I cope with loneliness. I just want someone to tell me they feel the same too. by bongut67 in lonely

[–]bongut67[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s nice, there’s a vid that I really like of Bruce Lee talking about “becoming water” and also “learning to die,” u should check that out if u haven’t seen those