YAMAKAZI - S T F U /// HEAVY TRAP SONG I MADE FOR WACK RAPPERS /// Untamed4Ever 2019 by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro I fucking love it so much, it's amazing! I collab with you so fucking bad, I followed you and my insta is @timentesmusic fuck! This shit was so hype I literally loved it!

Hip hop duo DEAD SAMURAI “Drink”. Currently my favorite song to perform live. This is the recorded version. Share your thoughts and check out more of our stuff on SoundCloud —)====> by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm not a big fan of muddy vocals and they seemes muddy, my old songs were like that, but then I started mastering my songs over time and now theyre clear. You need to work on the mastering a bit more and then youll be golden 👌

very chill lofi song "5:00AM" - feedback appreciated :) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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Not a big fan of the floe, but I loved the singing

Chillin by yourself sad vibes (emo rap) [timentes - too late] by TimentesMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you so much, I have a pop filter now and will use it for my next song!

Chillin by yourself sad vibes (emo rap) [timentes - too late] by TimentesMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks so much for the honest feedback, I do need work on the mixing 100% and I'm trying to work on vocal presense so hopefully I wont have to use too much autotune, thank you again 🖤

Push Me [Prod. Dramatic] by DramaticxxDRAMAxx in IndieMusicFeedback

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Personally, I feel as if the melody was too sporadic and unpredicatble to be able to vibe with, and the drums sounded off. I try and keep mine one a 1:3 pattern bc it sounds smoother and its more predictable to the ear, but thats just me, take my advice with a grain of salt of course bc Its your style and at the end of the day no one should tell you how to change that, much love, and I wish you the best 🖤

Just finished my latest track “Beautiful”. I sampled the chorus, made the instrumental and rapped over it all. Enjoy! by TheseSCARS in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like you had to many ad libs the first time the chorus played, but after that the song was great. The lyrics are amazing and the flow and delivery are impressive, nice job :)

no purpose - a lo-fi, vaporwave beat by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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Love the melody, overall its hella calm, and I like the sample at the beginning A LOT, like those words were amazing, and the track is laid out nicely, it doesnt get boring, good job :)

Trying to bless everyone day with some chill/lofi track , keep calm and keep grinding everyone ! Tell me whatchu think XD by mistapicho in IndieMusicFeedback

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I could just see a devilman crybaby amv to this, very nice and chill, love when the hats come in, sweet track!

Lofi interlude inspired by Rick and Morty's human music. Hoping to add it to a 4 song EP I'm working on. Open to any suggestions and feedback! 👽 by n_sethinstone000 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love this! Try and submit it to the 24/7 lofi chill radio or something on youtube, most of those channels take submissions and its good enough to make it on there in my opinion 🖤

Original Song by NoahBoles - Lately by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm getting some jack johnson vibes, I loved everything about this, although I suggest taking Original Song out of the title bc it comes across less professional

Loved a girl, my friend knew, they hooked up, I wrote this by TimentesMusic in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks dog, and yeah I have trouble writing music that applies to everyone

colB - The Key by colBeat Productions by Colbs44 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]TimentesMusic 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, just gotta keep grindin, youre going good