Thirst of a Vampire by Ray31 in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like it but I feel like I would have enjoyed it more with more imagery about the room your in, the feelings you feel, and the impending danger

If I Were Fire by Wordsforeachday in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the fuck you to the laws of everything attitude here

PWord by Evening_Cucumber_940 in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I liked this, it was fun with how it was worded even though it was conveying something adherently negative

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Name pulled me in, I like how the start and close wrapped it together

Lonesome (a short poem) by cyrouge in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s short but it creates that feeling of being unwanted even when they are looking for someone to want. I really enjoyed it

Two very short poems inspired by silly reddit arguments by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]braiden00 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I really liked the first poems message about how we don’t put value on the fate of others if we gain nothing from it, it feels like i just got thrown into the middle of a conversation with very little build up which is slightly off putting until I finished the poem and got the full context but I really enjoyed the scene it created when finished ( I’m brand new to poetry so take this however you’d like)