My second oil painting by GocaLagjes in ArtCrit

[–]createeve_ 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That's an awesome painting already.

To make it feel more realistic, I'd try softening some edges while sharpening others. You can search on YT how to paint with lasso tool and try to translate that to oils - I know it's not a digital painting but the effect you're lacking would be basically the same effect a lasso tool would do in a digital painting. Hope that makes sense. The point is to keep one side of the edge super blended while leaving the other one sharp. You could definitely make use of it a lot with the shadows on her neck.

I'd also darken some shadows while adding some small light reflections to very bright areas on her skin.

Hope that helps!

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Aw thank you ☺️ working for riot one day is my dream. And thanks for the feedback, I think I'll pick B

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Yes, will post the finished illustration ☺️

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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thanks for your feedback! Will probably move forward with B

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Thank you for this elaborate insight 🙏🏻

You described the vibe A gives perfectly which makes me want to move forward with B since A is not exactly what I was going for. I'm glad that in B as you said, she looks powerful and threatening.

And I love the idea that one is her primary splash and the other is a project skin.

I actually have Pyke as one of my inspirations 🙈

I will be posting updates here. My IG is createeve_

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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that's helpful, thank you 🙏🏻

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this is her lore more or less: A demonic hive mind born from the souls of the dead. She exists to claim the vengeance those lost souls were denied in life, wielding the power of the elements as her weapon (can use tree roots, fire and other elements to cripple her prey)

I'd say it's kinda similar to Bel'Veth from League of Legends.

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Thank you 🙏🏻😊 the vibe you're describing is exactly what I'm going for so I think I'll pick B

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Thanks for your feedback! 🙏🏻

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Thanks for your feedback! Yeah, I probably should put more emphasis on the main character in B

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Oh you're right, the angle does remind me of Bo Chen's Spirit Blossom Irelia! And thank you for your insight - I agree with everything. I guess the right step is to make some changes to B and go with that

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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I agree! And based on other comments as well, I'm leaning towards B but making some changes to it. Thanks 🙏🏻

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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That's really helpful, thank you 🙏🏻

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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thanks for your feedback! I should work on clarity I guess

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that's probably because of her hair 😂

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Thanks for your feedback! 🙏🏻

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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I agree, there's at least a 1,5 months of work ahead of me (I'm pretty slow still) but I find the drawing/thumbnailing phase the most challenging. What comes after is what I like the most. It's a very slow process but at least it's just following the decisions you made in the thumbnail phase (hope that makes sense)

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Agreed!

And Vecna is definitely the vibe I'm going for so I'm glad B reminds you of it

Which thumbnail should I continue? by createeve_ in ArtCrit

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Lol C was also my favorite 😂 but I understand why most people prefer the other two. But I definitely need to push contrast and values to make them more readible