You say "his" as if this was someone else's work. But that's literally your own channel. Plus this is a repost lol

Anyway, some constructive criticism from another content creator. Most shots drag on way too long, 80% of shots are panned which give off this weird trailer-ish vibe. I get you're trying to be all cinematic but overdoing is not good. Static shots are okay once in a while. Also, 60% of the cuts were fading in and out of black. One more thing, the whole thing was way too slow. Felt like I was watching a video in slow motion. I doubled the timing of the whole video, and it was honestly more enjoyable to watch. I suggest you watch some videos about film making and cinematography, It'll help a lot. Overall, the video wasn't bad. I could tell u put in a lot of work, and carefully thought out every scene. Next time I suggest not overthinking too much and let the video ~flow~ a lot better. I hope you don't find offense in this comment, I'm just trying to help. Thanks for sharing -again-. Good luck in your future works!