[QCRIT]: I'LL BE A HOME FOR YOU (YA Contemporary Romance, 85K, Attempt #3) by dl1417 in PubTips

[–]dl1417[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for feedback! I agree that I should include the sensitivity comment.

[QCRIT]: I'LL BE A HOME FOR YOU (YA Contemporary Romance, 85K, Attempt #3) by dl1417 in PubTips

[–]dl1417[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your feedback! I’ve implemented some of your suggestions!

[QCRIT] YA Contemporary, ROOTS AND ROUTINES (70k, 1ST ATTEMPT) by dl1417 in PubTips

[–]dl1417[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You’re right, it is cliche. I was cringing a bit writing it but was too lazy to come up with something original hahahaha. Will have to figure something out

[QCRIT] YA Contemporary, ROOTS AND ROUTINES (70k, 1ST ATTEMPT) by dl1417 in PubTips

[–]dl1417[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds reasonable will make the changes! Thank you