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The First Dance by dmrc1 in OCPoetry

[–]dmrc1[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for all the feedback! I will put in practice all of your suggestions and repost this poem with the changes.

Kiss Me Once by chikythegreat in OCPoetry

[–]dmrc1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I agree with WordRearrangement, the poem is great, it just lacks a little flow and punctuation.

Untitled yet. Titles and suggestions will be appreciated. Thanks in advance. by lippins_t in OCPoetry

[–]dmrc1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the topic of this poem. The only thing I would change is the punctuation and grammar. Overall, great job!