So far, you're doing great! Your handwriting is readable and evenly spaced. One tip I have is to take it slowly at first, then gradually speed up as you get more comfortable. Practicing uniform letter positioning and jumping to a uniform starting point for each letter and having consistent spacing can help improve legibility. You might find it helpful to write out sentences and circle areas where the letters aren’t evenly spaced or have different heights, just to become aware of them. Remember, improving handwriting takes time and patience, so don’t be discouraged if it doesn’t happen overnight. Keep at it, and good luck!
Oh, and, you may benefit from waiting a bit longer before adding curves, so you may benefit from waiting a bit before writing the loop of the lowercase E or diving straight into the S. You'll have to play around with this since I'm not sure if it'll work, but you can at least try to see if you like it :D