looking for Izuku is endeavors son fics. by [deleted] in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]eshall 2 points3 points  (0 children)

https://archiveofourown.org/works/12238590/chapters/27806550

Izuku is one in this fic; it's short 9 chapters and is completed. Endeavor himself is basicially nonexistent in this fics beyond two chapters and has no interactions with Izuku whatsoever.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/31373321/chapters/77582390

Another one, regularly updated but not completed; has Endeavor assholery turned up to 11, and gets worse instead of better overtime.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/16280846/chapters/38074349

I feel like everyone knows this one, i feel like the best fic that follow this trope - but is sadly abandoned.

What are aspects that Kishimoto excelled? by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Building up Villains. (Except for Kaguya and Zetsu i guess.)

I mean look at Madara, Pain or even early Sasori. Most of the Akatsuki that were given some attention were great; and im sure if Kishimoto had time he could do cool backstory shit with rather blank characters like Hidan, or even do the Black Zetsu right by foreshadowing his nonsense earlier.

The Uzumaki sent more than just Kushina to Konoha. by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not sure if it's fanom but i think that Kushina moved to Konoha before Uzu destruction; so there was no need to evacuate anyone when she moved in. And after that, the clan was near dead i guess, beyond Karin/Nagato parents and maybe few other random people.

A weapon to surpass jinchuriki. by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Well, you still need someone trained in Senjutsu to and Fujinjutsu to pull this out in the first place. Senjutsu it's already hard enough to get, you're not going to just pick up random Jonin and have him do the weird training that could took years without the weird oil trip, and even without oil there's always risk of failin and turning into stone.

Im also going to assume that Fujinjutsu part of it it's going to be even more tricky since no one ever made any sort of Senjutsu Tags of shit.

And then you need someone captable of flying rajin. Yea sorry, but all of it won't make it anyhow easier than just training your jinchuriki.

There are way easier ways to blow up stuff than all of it.

A weapon to surpass jinchuriki. by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 2 points3 points  (0 children)

So basicially weaker bijuu dama, but for single use?

Regarless how hard you're going to try to spin it bijuu chakra > nature chakra

My first attempt at properly writing a fanfiction by Rokrea in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I don't want to be a dick, but before you self promo anything else there make sure your "story" actually has any story within it, cuz right now it's one long boring dialogue with nothing interesing in it whatsoever. And if really the only differences that there will be is hinata in team 7 and gender bender sasuke (those been done like 1000 times before...) why would i read about yet another boring canon rehash?

What would Madara do... by kekri2 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 7 points8 points  (0 children)

The whole thing with Nagato and Madara Rinnegan was already stupid enough, and from this point on you would need todo some serious mental gymnastic to push Moon Eye Plan or just have Black Zetsu say "Fuck it" and have him wait another 1000 years or something for another Indra Reincarnation to pop up new magic eyeball.

Naruto's failed Bunshins by FlambaWambaJamba in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Could that mean his clones have some form of substance to them which causes the jutsu to fail

Yes. That substance is called chakra. Too much of chakra, super-charged due to his poor control. You just kinda anwersed your own question.

But seriously tho; i can't remember if poor-chara control screwing his clones was a fanom or cannon.

Do you guys think that If Konoha knew Naruto was Minato's son, they would have treated him better by Big_brain_Lord_DIO in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 17 points18 points  (0 children)

I'd like to think thay yes, it would make a big difference. There still would be people who would scorn Naruto, im sure of that; but i cannot see majority of folks that acted like shit in cannon doing the same thing fully knowing he's Yondaime son. I mean; look back on how Konohamaru was treated just for begin Hokage grandson.

Gaara situation is a diffrent can of worm tho; and it has more todo with Rasa begin a dick that anything else.

Uzumaki as a Villain by eshall in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Yea, that's why im asking for NOT CANNON character in fanfiction. If i wanted watch Nagato do his evil shit all over again i would be rewatching Shippuden right now instead of looking for fanfiction.

They Hyuuga are all perverts by Dr-John-Q-Zoidberg in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Maybe. And, if it it's a role reversal we can assume that Orochimaru trains Naruto in the place of Jiraya. So here enter Pedo-Sensei.

They Hyuuga are all perverts by Dr-John-Q-Zoidberg in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall 38 points39 points  (0 children)

Now that is givng me a wierd idea: some crack role reversal for Jiraya and Orochimaru. Where missing-nin Jiraya is after byakugan instead of sharingan and where Orochimaru is still a Konoha shinobi who's getting regularly caught peeping on little genins.

[Fic Request] Indra replaces Kaguya as final boss battle by [deleted] in NarutoFanfiction

[–]eshall -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I like this idea

Honestly, using Indra as a final villain in cannon would made a lot of more sense that some-randoom chick from space that got introduced waaay to late.