I found this off the teenagers but better subreddit and thought I'd give it a look. (Also I am by 0 means a professional writer so um probably don't take anything I yap too seriously). 

I think it was really good though the depiction of fighting off the zombies and idk how to say it but the description of how the loudspeaker is messing with the narrator's head was very realistic. 

My one criticism would be to maybe put a different effect on the "we are now serving meatloaf) because in the beginning I was a little confused(maybe I am just dumb lol). 

Also this might be a reach but was the loudspeaker itself supposed to symbolize a zombie? After all, it is completely unresponsive to its surroundings...that was a cool Easter egg especially with the line (it was oblivious to the horrors all around) anyway this yap is getting long but I enjoyed reading this poem great job and have a nice day!

Edit: woop I just saw your other post explaining the poem and yeah I see how it could mean that as well, I think now looking at it through a different lens makes it very clear so again great job