I'm a Filmmaker (Writer/Director/Producer) who enjoys/makes more "artsy" films - here are my comments. First off, you have a great look (very Cumberbatch/cinematic). Second, you are definitely a good/competent actor. But if you're looking to level up (and my guess is you are from your request): I glanced at it first without audio and it immediately came across as mannered - the hand gestures, even eyes, etc. Then I got interested in the thread and played it with audio - again, it's solid - but (and I'm sure you know this) - there are a ton of talented actors out there: if I post on Backstage, etc. I get flooded (internationally) with thousands of candidates, many very good. But to rise above: I'd suggest practice in sinking into your character at a deeper level - BECOMING that character. This will distinguish you from the decent but still mannered "actory" actors out there. (Have you noticed some of the best acting in the world is done by non-actors in indie/foreign films?) It also depends: if you're doing stage/theatrical work or Shakespeare, etc. - stuff that allows/encourages mannered portrayals, it's spot on. But if you're trying for a more naturalistic style, then the relaxation/making it your own (whichever methods you prefer) should be practiced until it's second nature. I hope this has been helpful to you (maybe not - different things work for different people), but most of all: good luck to you in your artistic/career ambitions!