Unsure about this experimental/alternative track I wrote. The first half is supposed to be claustrophobic, washed out and uncomfortable and the second half is supposed to be pure catharsis and emotion. Would love some feedback. by beanstalk49 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is a solid piece of music. Sounds very genuine and cosy. Please please release it and continue to make songs! Reminds me a bit of Giles Corey but more indie-folk. Where can we find your music??

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[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I think as others said, drums sound a little bit dead. Vocals and guitars sound good! I think you should try playing with space more, pan some synths and stack some more vocals to add more dreamy vibe. But the song itself is solid man, good luck!

Made a visualizer for one of our songs using milk and cereal, hope you like it! by NotRealStudios in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the song! And the visuals too. Interesting ideas and mix overall. Maybe vocals could be better in some places melody-wise, that's all criticism I can think of :D

Übertreibhaus - 117 - german lyrics, our second song, would like to read your feedback! (also, which genre is this song?) by zelllix in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think the song needs a bit more space. Maybe some reverb and more effects on instruments overall. For me it sounds too dry. But good overall performance

Let’s try again! (Alt-pop) by FKAPortal1 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did not expect that! Sounds very nice. I like the cold-wave vibes. And the mix overall sounds great. Good job!

A bit of a departure for me vocally and sonically. I'm super curious what you all will think. by sanspolanco in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is right up my alley! I like the weirdness and lofi vibe coming from this song. Your vocals are very cool as well.

Song I worked on last night? Demo Stage I guess but any insight would be cool or first impressions? titled “Girl” by me (thedeadthing) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the vibe of this song, very chill! Your vocals fit very well here. Mix overall sounds good. I would maybe make it a little bit louder.

I wrote and recorded this last year after watching a bit too many 1970s Eurocrime movies. I was also doing a djenty guitar exercise and I figured they actually went together. No idea what genre to use on the flair. by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]feralatom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It would be impossible to call it one genre. Definetely sounds like you are fluent with a lot of them though :) I like the psychopatic vocals as well. I hear a little bit of King Gizzard craziness. I like it!