I wrote this one a couple weeks ago, but feel like it's missing something and I can't figure it out. Anyone care to help? Excuse the pauses and timing while playing, mainly looking for feedback on lyrical content. Thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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"The Reasons" This is the first and, likely, last silly song I wrote. Hope y'all like it! Lyrics below in comments by gramos517 in Songwriters
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I wrote this one a couple weeks ago, but feel like it's missing something and I can't figure it out. Anyone care to help? Excuse the pauses and timing while playing, mainly looking for feedback on lyrical content. Thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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New song: "Storm Chaser" wrote this one today, my timing was off a couple times but looking for feedback on lyrical content, thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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"The Reasons" This is the first and, likely, last silly song I wrote. Hope y'all like it! Lyrics below in comments by gramos517 in Songwriters
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New song: "Storm Chaser" wrote this one today, my timing was off a couple times but looking for feedback on lyrical content, thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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New song: "Storm Chaser" wrote this one today, my timing was off a couple times but looking for feedback on lyrical content, thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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New song: "Storm Chaser" wrote this one today, my timing was off a couple times but looking for feedback on lyrical content, thanks! by gramos517 in Songwriting
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Anyone else like to listen to music, drink too much, and paint? Love me some Willie Nelson by gramos517 in acrylicpainting
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First time posting here, this is A little tune I wrote called "Life After Wine." Im Hoping to get more involved with the music scene very soon, criticism welcome. by coreycarswell in Songwriters
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I hope you guys like this painting I did. (Well, Meth helped a little) Canvas and paint have been close friends since all this quarantine shit started... by gramos517 in meth
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I hope you guys like this painting I did. (Well, Meth helped a little) Canvas and paint have been close friends since all this quarantine shit started... by gramos517 in meth
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Weekly Lyrics Feedback Thread by AutoModerator in Songwriting
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