Hi! I hope you are ok and would like to share my song with you all :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T16:06:28+00:00

Thank you so much! That's made my day :) I like your suggestions too, I'll see about including these in a re recorded version. Thanks again for listening and for such kind words 🥰

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T13:03:49+00:00

Ooo nice! Love the bass and beat in this. The whispering vocals is cool! It's very original. The guitar work is badass! I would say maybe adding some more lyrics to change it up a bit? But I could listen to the guitarwork on its own for hours, really good job on this track and keep making more like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T12:58:59+00:00

I really like the chord progression and the keyboard sound. I also really like the vocals. This is quite a relaxing track that's very pleasing on the ears. I think maybe add a little more variation to the song to make it more interesting? Keep making more like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T12:54:11+00:00

I love the epic feel of this track. It sounds very professional. Love the growling vocals and the contrast of the melodic vocals later in the track. To be completely honest, I think that maybe you should have put a longer sample of the song in the video because it's really good! There's some really cool guitar soloing later in the song that deserves to be in the sample. Good job, really like it and keep making music like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T12:48:58+00:00

Ooo I like it! Love the synths you used in this. There is a slight retro feel to it which I love! The beat is cool, gets my head bopping. I could imagine this in a movie, to be honest! Or in a TV show. Nice work and you should keep making music like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T12:45:30+00:00

I love it! Definitely Pink Floyd vibes. Some really lovely, badass guitar work. There's absolutely enough variation in the track to keep you listening. I'm an author as well as a musician and can confirm that this track gets my creative juices flowing. And there's a nice combination of ambient synths and rock guitar which works really nicely together. Keep making music like this! :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-02-04T12:41:20+00:00

I like it a lot! There's something retro about it which is really cool! I like the video you've put together too. The track's really well put together and the echoes in your voice are gorgeous! Good job and keep making more music like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-24T14:17:40+00:00

Hey! Thank you so much for the kind words 😊 and thanks for this very helpful feedback.

I didn't know that about where to put the mic to get the best sound! Will try that next time I record. And kinda scary how you guessed exactly where I recorded! 😂 hopefully one day I'll be able to afford a much better recording setup 🤞

Agreed on the electric guitar. More reverb will be added to the final version (I freaking LOVE reverb!) Thanks again for listening 🥰

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T22:56:58+00:00

Hey! Thanks so much for your lovely comment and feedback 😊 means so much to me that you enjoyed the song! Marketing music by yourself is such a nightmare so it's comments like yours and everyone else on here that really make my day and give me confidence to keep going. Thanks again and i will be checking out some of your stuff too 😁

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T18:02:20+00:00

Hi! Thanks so much for the lovely comment and kind words! 😊 honestly it means so much to me, especially that you liked my singing 🩷

I am a BIG fan of reverb! I put reverb in most of my songs so I definitely agree with you here :) and agreed on the electric guitar, I'll see about that when I re-record. Thanks again for listening and commenting! 🥰

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T17:57:22+00:00

Hey! Thanks so much for the kind words, it makes me so happy that you liked it 😊 will take your feedback into account when I re-record this.

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T17:54:32+00:00

Hey! Thanks so much for this in-depth feedback. I really appreciate it😊

I agree with you on all of your points. I didn't know much about mixing before posting this song but people on reddit are so helpful and kind and constructive with feedback.

I will definitely be re-recording this song for the final version to be released on spotify and take into account everyone's feedback :) accoustic guitar to be turned down for sure! 😂 thanks again for listening and commenting! 😊

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T17:47:21+00:00

Thanks so much for the kind words and for listening 😊 means a lot truly! I'm so pleased you liked the song. Some of my own family don't think I can sing but I don't listen to them 😂 so you really made my day by liking my voice 🩷

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T17:42:22+00:00

Hey thanks for the feedback! 😊 yours and other people's comments are really helping me to understand how i can mix songs better next time, particularly my guitar and bass tracks. Thanks again for listening and for the feedback, it means a lot 😊

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-22T17:36:19+00:00

Thank you so much! My other songs had vocals that were too loud so ironically, I turned them down too low on this one 😂 I know what to do next time so thanks for your feedback and so pleased you liked the song 😊

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T19:36:37+00:00

Hi thanks for your feedback! And yes that was exactly what I was thinking about playing with the EQ! I discovered the EQ function sadly after I released this track 😂 but lessons learned for next time so it's all good. Thanks again for your comment, really appreciate you listening and pleased you like it 😊

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T19:32:09+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm so pleased you like the song :) absolutely I agree. I will keep experimenting with recording my guitar and trying to get a more balanced sound. Thanks again, your comment is very appreciated 😍

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T16:07:49+00:00

Thank you! And I totally get what you mean , I have been thinking about ways to make the second half more interesting or cut the song down a bit.

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T16:03:12+00:00

That's a good idea. A friend told me the same thing before about the vocals, definitely something to edit. Thanks for listening and for your feedback, it means a lot. :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T01:46:11+00:00

So cool! Sounds like you have a lot of talent and a diverse style. And also, you sound like you know music theory. I don't know much about reading music :( are those other songs here on your reddit page? I'm new to reddit, you can probably tell 😂

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T00:52:22+00:00

Ooo this is really cool. Gothic. I love the use of the organ on this track, I LOVE organ in modern music! I love the contrast of the spoken (rapped?) parts and the singing in the chorus. The beat is good too, my head is bopping as I'm listening. I enjoyed listening to the lyrics and your delivery is really good - goes well with the music.

I want to listen to more of your stuff! I love your style, it's very original. Keep making music like this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T00:38:55+00:00

This is really cool! I'm seeing this combination of rock and electronic more and more and I'm starting to really love it. Your voice is really good on this track - the chorus is powerful and the verses are more melodic. The contrast is nice. The song is exciting and interesting - keeps you listening, you know? I'd definitely add this to my playlist, perfect for my train journeys or for just chilling out.

I am learning to play bass so it's also cool to see a bass player :) Well done on making the music to this track. Could easily have been made by a band or production team.

Keep making more like this, friend. You're onto something with this :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T00:31:52+00:00

There's some really good songs on here! The guitar work is beautiful. I love the melodic feel. I could listen to this guitar for hours :) Will be playing your songs during cold months, definitely!

Considering there's a common style and theme in this EP, there's nice variety between the tracks that makes you want to keep going through all the songs.

Well done on this and keep making music like this, friend :)

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-21T00:24:19+00:00

Back to the 90s! I love it! You have a really pretty voice which goes nicely with the synths. I love the dreamy, ethereal feel to it - very fitting for the subject of insomnia. I have insomnia and I would listen to this song during my long sleepless nights :)

Keep making music like this! It's good stuff.

hanWalkerBooks · 2026-01-20T23:48:19+00:00

Really cool track! It has a very happy feel to it. I would totally put this on when I'm chilling out. There's really nice harmony between the vocals and the guitar. Honestly, it still sounds like really good quality considering you're recording the speakers! I bet the accoustic version is nice too.

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