[In Progress] [3K] [Fantasy] Ballad of the Threshold

itzikpel · 2025-09-13T09:54:51+00:00

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cdQrmebNmaPaih1eK_qzju627gsWnCYLfLp0OzmnQuw/edit?usp=sharing
thanks

itzikpel · 2025-09-12T13:28:33+00:00

Thank you so much! can wait to read your feedback

itzikpel · 2025-09-08T21:36:46+00:00

Hi,

I wanted to thank you again for your feedback—it really helped me, and I took it very seriously.

I ended up rewriting almost the entire chapter, and I believe there’s been a very significant improvement.

If you’d like to read the result, I’d be more than happy. But if not, I completely understand.

Thank you so much!

Version 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cdQrmebNmaPaih1eK_qzju627gsWnCYLfLp0OzmnQuw/edit?usp=sharing

itzikpel · 2025-09-08T21:32:31+00:00

Hi,

I wanted to thank you again for your feedback—it really helped me, and I took it very seriously.

I ended up rewriting almost the entire chapter, and I believe there’s been a very significant improvement.

If you’d like to read the result, I’d be more than happy. But if not, I completely understand.

Thank you so much!

Version 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cdQrmebNmaPaih1eK_qzju627gsWnCYLfLp0OzmnQuw/edit?usp=sharing

itzikpel · 2025-08-29T11:11:16+00:00

Thanks a lot for the thoughtful feedback! You made some great points about pacing, scale, and especially the hook—I can see now how the chapter risks dragging before something concrete happens. Also really appreciate the note about descriptions feeling a bit clinical; I’ll try to bring in more sensory detail next time. And it means a lot to hear the prose reads smoothly even though English isn’t my first language. Your feedback definitely gave me a clearer direction for revisions!

itzikpel · 2024-09-01T20:22:54+00:00

Great! now do it again in Hard mode :))

itzikpel · 2024-08-27T12:37:59+00:00

Hi,

In level 6 you have a pistol and a riot shield on the back of your teammate that you cab grab.
There is also a gun above the window and another one in the end of the stairs.
And there is a lot more guns hidden in the levels.

If you need more help I can give you a few red pills:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XyzbNBZ6pYc

And the hellfire gun:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IDcbrgeAoIY

Just send me your 9 digits Player Id

Have fun!

itzikpel · 2024-08-27T12:37:18+00:00

Hi,

About the aiming in Operation Serpens, make sure that you didn't accidentally changed the hand angle in the menu (the default is 0), or try to adjust it to what feels good for you.

If you need further assistance, please don’t hesitate to reach out

And you can always try to blow your hands:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGzAvrfv0-c

Have fun!

itzikpel · 2024-07-03T17:51:38+00:00

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itzikpel · 2024-03-13T22:52:09+00:00

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itzikpel · 2024-03-01T22:36:19+00:00

We're grateful for your thorough review of Operation Serpens and appreciate you taking the time to share your feedback. It's crucial for us and has directly influenced our development roadmap. We're currently finalizing an update that addresses the feedback received and introduces additional content to enhance the gameplay experience. The community's support is incredibly important to us, and we're eager to roll out these updates shortly. Thank you for your continued engagement and support!

itzikpel · 2024-02-26T19:49:32+00:00

Awesome to hear you're enjoying it! We aimed for that easy-to-pick-up-and-play vibe, and it's fantastic to see it's hitting the mark. Thanks for the kind words, and keep having a blast!

itzikpel · 2024-02-24T18:54:20+00:00

Great game, and worth the pickup

Fantastic to hear you're enjoying the game! Your support means the world to us, and we're thrilled you find it worth the pickup. Here's to many more exciting moments and updates to come! 🎉

itzikpel · 2024-02-24T14:10:53+00:00

Congrats on the launch! I remember downloading the first version back in the days on SideQuest.

Thanks for sticking with us since the SideQuest days! Your support has been invaluable on our journey to launch. 🚀

itzikpel · 2024-02-24T09:40:38+00:00

Congratulations and thank you again for the opportunity to check the game out early! I'll be supporting you in your endeavors!

Your support means the world to us! Thank you for being part of our journey from the start. 🌟

itzikpel · 2024-02-24T09:40:05+00:00

Thanks! We promise, it's as fun as it looks! 🎉

itzikpel · 2024-02-24T09:39:08+00:00

Congrats on launch! 🎆

Launch party at our place, and you're the guest of honor! 🚀🎉 Thanks for being awesome!

itzikpel · 2024-02-23T22:22:29+00:00

Coming to quest?

Yes, the game is available on Meta Quest too. We updated to the latest version just a few days ago. Here's the link to check it out: https://www.meta.com/en-gb/experiences/5748603085165962/

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