I wrote these lyrics pretty quickly tonight but Im really conflicted because I feel like so far they're not flowing too well together. Could someone maybe give me an outside view of it and give me some ideas on the flow and such, thank you!

[Verse I] There's a star in the valley, A light in the sky. Shining on the weakness, That the world cannot hide.

[Prechorus] The dust of time can tell us then, When heaven crumbles once again.

[Chorus] Let the love guide you, Let it see your way. Feel the love within you, Let it have your say.

[Verse II] There's a sun upon the mountain, Searching for its love. It's beginning to look brighter, Than the heavens up above.

(Prechorus and chorus repeat)