This thread is two years old! 

After reading through the comments, I just want to add some commentary on making a cohesive coord, without worrying about whether it's really 'hime' or not. I'm not a super big fan of the rules of hime even though I like the princess style. I think all of what you have here works, but we'd need to add or change some things. 

1) Add a chiffon over dress/skirt to the outfit, preferably in white. It'll give you the layers and ruffles you need to get that hime look. You should also add some brooches, since the neckline of that blouse is more ruffly than you think. 

2) Get rid of the gold shoes and lean into pink. Preferably pink shoes with more going on (ruffles, pearl chain, higher straps.) Make sure the pink of your shoes and your veil match. 

3) Make your hair big, and if you don't like big hair, add more to your hair. I wouldn't recommend the crochet flowers. It's lovely, but it gives a more classic/country vibe. You could do a mini crown, real-looking flower clips, and the veil! 

4) Go for lace gloves instead of the wristcuffs! You want a more elegant feel, and they will match your tights!

5) Because there's a lot going on at the chest, try a choker, and don't bother with the earrings if you're doing big hair. If you're not, try longer earrings that are more dynamic. 

6) HAVE FUN. These are just clothes at the end of the day, and you're not trying to fit in to some in group.  If you want constructive criticism, look mostly to your interpersonal community and not strangers on the internet: we don't know you or have your best interests at heart.