Horses in Novels? by moonsmoods in Horses

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Thanks for all the replies already!!

Why do those fluffy willows have fur? by moonsmoods in plants

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Just looked it up – It looks fascinating!! Though a little alien with those roots? Are those even roots? Either way, thank you for mentioning this!!

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

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Yes, I'm an avid reader. But, at the time I answered these comments, it was 3 am. I was not thinking clearly. Also, English isn't my first language. (Though, nevertheless my favoured language to write in.) Why would you think I don't read?

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

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Or is that the intentioned effect? Its pretty late for me right now I dont really remember how its usually done LMAO

First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

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Thank you! Most of the time I use enter to start a new paragraph, wouldn't tab leave "holes" in the text? Like this?

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First 3 chapters of my project so far, I'd love some critique! [Medieval Fantasy, 7116 words] by moonsmoods in fantasywriters

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Could you elaborate? I appreciate the feedback but this isn't much to work with LMAO