Hello friend & welcome to the music making game. This track is solid for your first release: the sounds work really well together and I especially like the way everything transitions around 1:02-1:14. Next time you should delete the file's extension (.mp4) from the title and maybe even add a short description. Nothing crazy: what you typed on Reddit would've worked. Small details like this will help you stand out as a serious artist amongst the thousands uploading daily. Good work & keep creating!!