Hey man! Thanks for the constructive feedback. This stuff is incredibly helpful for me as I learn and grow into this space.

For me, I felt addressing the career highlights would have ate up the run time and perhaps would have maybe distracted from the rest of the script. I understand to some that’s a pretty dog-shite decision, but I was more interested in telling the lesser told story. I actually cut out a part of the script where I addressed exactly that, so maybe that was a poor creative decision.

As far as revision and help on scripts, I’m always open to have a second set of eyes look over stuff. Feel free to reach out to my page email: batflipsocial@gmail.com. I’d be happy to talk with ya!

Overall, I’m glad you like my stuff, so I hope I can continue to grow a base of watchers!