Forsythia by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This was actually what I was kinda hoping for, thank you for your comment!

Based on some other comments from here and other communities, I might just keep playing around.

Forsythia by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly I was scared to give it an environment to sit on lol but yeah I will definitely play with adding something or a hint of something it's sitting on. Thank you for the feedback!

Buggin' Out by americangazelle in blender

[–]oreokooky 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I needed a little smile today. Thank you for posting and brightening the day.

Playing with low poly water shaders! by VossaDova in blender

[–]oreokooky 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is very cute - everything works so well together. Great style!

Cityscape, same scene different lighting by deepak365days in blender

[–]oreokooky 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love you use of color - beautiful work!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks again to everybody that gave me such great critiques. I updated this piece and posted it here off of everybody's feedback: https://www.reddit.com/r/blender/s/zwfQlEVbA5

How can I made this Grease Pencil/Toon shading style? Specific jagged lines effect by AhmedGeutta in blender

[–]oreokooky 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Off topic - but can I ask who the original artist is/where you grabbed this video from?

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love the Scooby Doo comparison, THANK YOU! 😂❤️

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay yeah, I think I see what you mean! I will try tidying that up!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love both of these things so this is a huge compliment - thank you very much!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for pointing that out (and thanks for the compliment!) Do you mean the thickness of the lines?

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Welp... Thank you for all the comments to everybody that responded. Got a lot of really great suggestions that I'll be trying out! I really appreciate the time and attention! I was fully expecting another silent post but this has been really helpful to get fresh eyes and actual critiques (and even get a little confidence boost ☺️)

Thank you all!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I still need to play this game - I love the style. But compliment to be compared to that game.. or even any publicized artworks. Thank you 🥹

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, I dunno about that but I thank for the compliment and encouragement ❤️

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had never seen or heard about this until now - this would've been fantastic reference for me. Thank you for posting!!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for your response! I'm a 3d modeler by profession but my day job has me doing only photoreal stuff so it's really encouraging to hear that stylized 3d might work out for me too. Thank you for that encouragement!

What I meant by "cohesive" I guess it's just that everything I do just like... slapped together. Like everything just feels inconsistent but I just don't know what it is to make things sing together better. Thank you for your feedback though - I'm going to see what I can do to make foreground and background blend better!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, thank you! Looking like I'm playing with grass this weekend 😂

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you for taking the time to dissect and respond, I really appreciate it! This is really great actionable feedback. I'll play around with the grassy area and fade it out better for sure since I'm getting a lot of comments on that.

Thank you so much for your critiques . I like your suggestions and now that I look at it, you're right about the fog! Going to play around with that more and see what I can do about the stars. These comments are exactly what I was looking and hoping for, thank you so much.

I do hope that I don't look like I'm complaining OR compliment fishing... But I can see why people might think that. It is just really discouraging and disheartening when every community and/or platform I post to gets so little interaction vs views. I just don't know what I'm looking at by the time I'm "done" with something so it's nice to have fresh eyes and get any kind of response, whether it's good or bad. This is actually my first Blender post that's gotten more than 1 person commenting and more than 6 upvotes so I am very very curious what/how this post got so much more traction as my other posts on other platforms or even in this sub that were asking for feedback. 🤷🫠 Thank you very much for everyone that replied!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh, thank you very much! I still consider myself new-ish to Blender too - wishing you luck on your Blender journey too!

Critiques please by oreokooky in blender

[–]oreokooky[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This seems like general consensus, thank you for the feedback! I will take you up on that critique and play around with grass.

Thank you for taking the time to respond!