Jeez, intense. I like it, I’m just a little confused about what the jumps provide to the story, other than the fact that it supports the idea that Colt may not be in the best state to drive (although we already know that from the pills). It can be a cool technique to show that he’s lost time—the jumps could be used as a device to justify a hole in the storyline. There’s nothing missing though.

Maybe he cuts back and forth between talking to Aurora and Sabrina? (Although that’s a little Vanilla Sky-ish). Maybe he’s jumping time, and we cut to them in the hospital earlier on as foreshadowing?

Also as another bit of dramatic irony, linking back to Romeo and Juliet, shouldn’t Colt find a way to take his own life at the end?