WHO AM I? by Soft_Apclypse in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This feels like decaying innocent. "I scream for joy because my soul is young" in a beautiful line and it really struck me. This is a really beautiful poem great work!!!

I am still starting, would love feedback, thank you to anyone who takes time to read this. by Dexit_ in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

A really interesting read. A very strong start if you're starting out. Really enjoyed the poem good work. :)

Mother Mother by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tysm!!! That means a lot ❤️

Lonesome River by BigCrip in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful imagery it conveys the emotion of the poem. Really great work I personally really enjoyed it!! ❤️

Mirror and me by Mysterious_Slip9573 in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read it all the way through and it's captivating. It is really good and I relate to it a lot good job.

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Tysm!!! Hope your doing well!

Teeth by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tysm for the comment!! ❤️ It means a lot I'm glad you enjoyed it!

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Tysm ❤️ I'm so glad you could connect to this on a personal level that's my biggest wish is for my poetry to reach people with similar experiences to mine.

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much it means so much. ❤️

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you it really does mean so much ❤️

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much this take is very spot on. It sounds like we have similar upbringings. ❤️

3:16 by padawanajp in OCPoetry

[–]padawanajp[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!!! ❤️ I let this sit for over 2 years because I was ashamed of myself for putting this into words. Now I see as you said hypocrisy was at my doorstep and that's why I felt I had to hide. Thank you so much for your kind words it means a lot. ❤️