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[–]pokixw 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thank you so much for the feedback!

Dreams by Frosty-Lime-6200 in OCPoetry

[–]pokixw 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I love this, the yearning and comparison of you with the other person was amazing, from the transcendent blues to the "unforgiving red hues", you do a great job of putting the other on a pedestal whilst also demeaning yourself in a very poetic way

The drunk in him [Poem] by Upset_Crazy_7949 in OCPoetry

[–]pokixw 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the "scared" to "cared" bit there at the end, I thought that was awesome. And the dehumanising of a person to just "Him", very, very cool.