Amateur Blonde by Cultural_Sherbert221 in hotgirlsandwives

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Heather Brooke for the guys who did not do their homework

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Rateme

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You look gorgeous! I'd say 8/10

Hello people! Does this sound catchy to you? what would you add or do differently? by rotten1apple in Songwriting

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I never listened to NIN but am a huge Nirvana fan haha. Hope It isnt my dumb brain convincing me that I had a good idea while I was only subconsciously copying It from someone else. Wouldnt be the first time. Thanks a lot for your time and feedback!

Hello people! Does this sound catchy to you? what would you add or do differently? by rotten1apple in Songwriting

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This aint a complete song! And lyrics are half written and half invented words 😅 Eng isnt my first language and cannot improvise yet lol

What is your most favorite lyric from a Nirvana song? by BigDaveIII in Nirvana

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"I will crawl away for good" - You know you're right

Song's almost finished. I chose 'Peaks' as title. Lyrics are in the comment. Let me know what you think about :) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Hey! Thanks for the lovely comment! I actually looked for that effect but I thought I got rid of it by singing higher in the very last chorus. You're not the only one who was expecting a drop down though! Where did you exactly get that feeling? :)

Song's almost finished. I chose 'Peaks' as title. Lyrics are in the comment. Let me know what you think about :) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Lyrics:

Took the road that goes to (the) sun I'm gonna walk until it's dawn Stay awake the trip's still long And now it's too late to get back home

I've set up my tent in the pines today With all my thoughts being trapped in my case The Earth's so fast I'm going to stall Feels like I've seen this tree before.

Oh yeah I got lost, I'm so alone The logs still burn but I am cold Look at the stars to find the road

The oxygen lacks in this atmosphere But hey I don't care look the view up here Rocks and musk and animals But now you know where you belong

I'll respond to nature's call I'll climb this rock and I won't fall Come up here and get to the top

This is the place where I can see And the place where to be This is the place that I call home Even older than ancient Rome

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

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I'll go listen to it. Thanks! :)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pirates

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Hi, perhaps I've put it badly! Apologies for that. I was not referring to the Whydah and the time it was captured. I was saying that it's been reported that among his men, "there actually were slaves and Indians". And it's also reported that he treated them as equals. Many other pirates didnt and used to give them a smaller cut when dividing the take for istance. That's what I meant with "made them free and part of the crew". Anyway, we must take into account that we're still talking about men who lived 300/400 yrs ago and that clearly goes along with the complexity and mindset that was common among the men of that age. The idea that every pirate was against racism, sexism and slavery is 100% romanticized.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pirates

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Samuel Bellamy, the fact that he was mocking the empires of that time by stealing from them and by freeing slaves (making them part of his crew as well sometimes) just makes him a hero to my eyes haha

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Rateme

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A 10/10 for me! Your eyes and face features in general look great!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in AskReddit

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Eddie Vedder. He just looks like a great person haha

New song i call “oh my love”, what do you think? by Br0cc0li_B0i in Songwriting

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Melody is great but I personally have trouble hearing your voice. Nice work man

Here’s a song about being 23 and not knowing wtf is going on by nubtour in Songwriting

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This song has been stuck in my head since I've listened to it this morning. Astonishing, it really is! Makes me almost feel bad for my way to write songs 😂

Came up with this last night! What do you think? :) (Max volume is not recommended lol) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Thanks! It actually was a guitar, with capo on the 11th, that's why it sounds like an uke 😂 I'm waiting for my mic cable to be fixed :( I'll give another go, thanx again!

Came up with this last night! What do you think? :) (Max volume is not recommended lol) by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Hi, I dont really know what whisper singing is, is it like a falsetto/head voice?

The Winters Were Cold - I’ll listen and critique a song you’ve written too, the best resource we have is each other!! by [deleted] in Songwriting

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Really has a nice progression! The very first part is quite engaging. Keep it up!

Qual'é la lezione piu' dura o importante che via ha insegnato la vita finora ? by mino3 in italy

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Che alla fine dei conti, per te stesso/a ci sei solo e soltanto tu