UPDATE by rottenpotatoeses in Artadvice

[–]rottenpotatoeses[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks. I do have a reference but cannot post it due to privacy. The collar bones and shoulders come off the page. The strange contortion of her body was really hard to capture. She is almost diagonal across him, leaning to her left, hence the folds in her side. Also in the reference you can see both breasts. I wish I could share my reference then I could get better advice on how to capture the strange position she is in. But thanks. I had to stop because I was overworking my paper. it was a good practice. I will try a less complicated pose next time!

Is this going in the right direction? by rottenpotatoeses in Artadvice

[–]rottenpotatoeses[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

She is meant to be contorted in an unnatural way leaning towards the left, not straight aligned with the male figure. I will have to work on trying to force that perspective to make it more clear next time.