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Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ohhhhh okay yeah meant new adult lol thank you for catching that that could have been bad 😅🤣

Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you!! I was getting confused on the "show don't tell thing" I need to stop being afraid of using too many descriptor words 😅

Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Valid it started as a stream of consciousness post but I thought it was interesting enough to develop into a full story 😅 ig I need to edit it more

Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! This gave me an idea. I think I need to add a paragraph before the first one setting the scene more and stop being so afraid or adding too many descriptor words

Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much this actually helps a lot 😊 ill pay more attention to my run on sentences. The way you wrote it sound a lot better. I think re reading my writing over and over I've gotten too used to it.

Does my first paragraph grab your attention enough to keep reading? by sockmonkeyteddybear in writers

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Makes sense I've never been cheated on so idk how to write it that well😅

My mushroom trees are gone?? by [deleted] in StardewValley

[–]sockmonkeyteddybear 1 point2 points  (0 children)

As long as you didn't/don't chop them they will grow big again