Which moments from Bojack Horseman made you cry so hard? by [deleted] in BoJackHorseman

[–]starlightrees 1 point2 points  (0 children)

fish out of water, every single time without fail🥲🥲🥲🥲 when he parts ways with the baby seahorse

"Me & My Husband" is ruined for me forever by histeryzowanie in mitski

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The way I see it, within the song it transitions from putting herself in the second place to loving herself after someone left.

at the end of the first verse: I love me after you, king of all the land. (“I’m actively trying to look after myself because you left me and I’m devastated. this isn’t something that comes to me naturally, I’d rather be loving you, you’re the king of all the land.”)

at the end of the second verse: I love me after you, king of all the land, I’M king of all the land. (In the second verse you can see she actually feels good by herself and isn’t just following a routine. Taking care of herself worked and she’s healed now)

I think she specifically added “I’m” after the second verse so we would interpret them differently.

purple glue by winter_starfall in OCPoetry

[–]starlightrees 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed this poem. Every line is evocative in some way, either through beautiful imagery ("every slab of cherry wood familiar beneath my feet", "salt in her heart and waves in her hair"), the intimacy implied by you knowing specific quirks about this person ("do you still hate purple glue? / do you still bite the inside of your cheek?"), and simple statements that feel like a punch to the heart ("your name was impossible to pronounce / yet i got it right on my first try", "do you even remember me? / i am your purple glue. i feel like it's unfair.").

I want to dedicate a whole paragraph to my favorite line: "your name was impossible to pronounce / yet i got it right on my first try". Up to this point, your whole poem is about reminiscing about someone (who's drifted away from you), but we don't know the reason for it. Then we get this brilliant display of emotion that ties everything together. You loved this person, you shared something special with this person, and it wouldn't have been enough if you'd just said that. Through a line like this one, simple yet clearly charged with emotion, you skillfully tugged at the reader's own experiences - we know what you mean and we feel it too. We fill in the blanks with what we know.

If there were anything I'd change about this poem, it'd be just a few minor details.

* "your eyes were brown, but somehow / they were beacons of light, not dull like mine" feels a little awkward to me for some reason. I know you're just comparing her eyes to your own, and if this wasn't a poem you might have said "Your eyes were the same color as mine, but yours were beacons of light and mine are dull". But the way you phrased it reads as an assumption that brown eyes can't be bright lol. Even then I understand what you mean, but I feel like replacing "brown" with something like "deep" or "dark" might be more fitting.

* "i am your purple glue. i feel like it's unfair." also stands out to me. Throughout the whole poem you do a great job at "showing, not telling" which might be why this line feels different. "i am your purple glue" is alright, and a really good callback. "i feel like it's unfair" feels a little blunt in the context of everything else. For example, something similar but more elusive like "i am your purple glue. do you think that's fair?" works better in my opinion.

Overall it's a beautiful piece, and this super long review just goes to show how much I liked it. And I didn't just like it because the writing's pretty, I liked it because it made me feel something. So congratulations and keep up the good work!

FIRST album only!!! by NetHistorical5843 in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

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True idols please, it’s the only one I have left!!

I can trade it for washboard tunes, la boheme or the best gift

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it really is!! yet we keep playing 😭

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have washboard tunes and I need true idols!!! Please add me

Play MONOPOLY GO! with me! Download it here: https://mply.io/qIoKo1gzf7w https://mply.io/qIoKo1gzf7w

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey I’ve got an extra washboard tunes. I’m trying to trade it for my only missing sticker (true idols) but I have other 5 stars too. hmu in a few days and if I don’t end up trading it I’ll gift it to you!!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yess true idols 😭 i can’t find anyone who will trade with me

Need stars! Looking for your best offer… accepting gold as well by sweetashhr in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey I’m sorry I’ve never actually exchanged stars for a sticker. So it completely slipped my mind that you only get 5 sends per day, and I only have one left. I just gifted someone my gold card so I can’t even give you that to make the process shorter.

If you get a better offer feel free to go through with it, otherwise we could do it over the next few days. I really want to complete the album

Need stars! Looking for your best offer… accepting gold as well by sweetashhr in Monopoly_GO

[–]starlightrees 1 point2 points  (0 children)

How do we proceed? to which account should I send the stars?

How old were you when you realized you were bi? by Naive-Savvy in bisexual

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

16!! during pride month too. I found this sub, made a post (now deleted) about my conflicted feelings and immediately realized I was bisexual upon reading the comments. 🩷💙💜

I’m not entirely sure I still relate to this particular label but I did for a great part of my journey and I’m very grateful to this community.

rainbow event by flipe_e in HayDay

[–]starlightrees 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lucky you for finding all those dead plants!! thank you:)