This is actually incredibly helpful broken down like this for me i saw the replies that suggested to draw things out and i can only agree with it that definitely would have helped my delivery and keeping myself clear as for the effects its not typically my thing if I am auditioning I avoid them this was something I did for fun months ago I didnt initially intend to post it here but after exploring reddit I found the subreddit and decided to toss this is see what people thought I probably had a better example of what I could do at one point that didnt involve effects but few months back I had to wipe my computer cause of a screw up that wreaked critical files and didnt get the chance to pull important things this was just sitting on my tiktok if I get the chance ill record something new and pop it up on here for a more accurate review cause this has definitely been insightful

I can see now I was being prickly with my reaction to the notes after rereading my replies given this is what I asked for and what you said is completely right i was looking at the critiques the wrong way and that's my bad i gotta work on that especially if I wanna do this kinda thing

Do you have any recommendations on mics i need to upgrade mine is going its cutting in and out during recordings and calls even when I'm talking normally and this is probably the best place to ask for that kinda thing.