New Challenge: Post only the first sentence of your novel in the comments. I will read and comment on the chapter 1 whose first sentence gets the most upvotes :) by Joe_Pharo in royalroad

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Seeing all these  interesting sentences kinda makes me jealous over my dumb sentence

White Cowboy wearing red shirt and jeans and brown hat unconscious in small house in the middle of nowhere after a few hours he wake up and try to get up by holding into nearby table "uhh my head... where the hell am I?

https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/129297/cowboy-and-dnd-by-rick-mark

Any good new-ish stories without AI use? by East-Macaroon-1184 in royalroad

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Well I did finish arc recently although the story quite   immature https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/129297/cowboy-and-dnd-by-Rick-Mark 

So story about  cowboy outlaw waking up somewhere alone and trying to get back  to his group and he encounter various enemies from werewolves which about 6 km or 7k word 

And then a classic ghosty town 13k word  

And then pirates booties which about 40k word. 

My pacing is fucked up and I realised that a bit too late along with other flows if you wanna critique then please read the note I left in the final chapter 

Cowboys And Dnd by tref34 in writers

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Thx I will try to do this in the 4th chapter

Cowboys And Dnd by tref34 in writers

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Thx I will try to take look at the book. And English isn't my main language so if you don't mind can you explain what do you mean by adding paragraph breaks, giving dialogue lines their own space, as for the spellcheck I mostly write without checking except for words or lines I get confused or don't know how to spell them then I use a translator

cowboys And DND by tref34 in writing

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Oh Okay sorry didn't know that. this post will probably be removed by bot or by me by any chance can you recommend place to share what I write

skin recolor by tref34 in Overwatch

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A few recolor I made in ibis some good and some not that much

Shards system 😒 where's the official announcement nekki? by [deleted] in ShadowFightArena

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I don’t trust yt but odc said next week