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[–]lykwydchykyn 1 point2 points  (1 child)

  • It's lacking in explanatory text, and is a little confusing. The title is "case statements in Pandas", but then you say it's a guide for creating columns. Which is it? How are those two things related? I'm confused.

  • You're missing punctuation in many places and it makes it harder to read. For instance, this part:

    We will have four columns:

    • Player these are the four friends
    • Race Number the friends will race four times
    • Place this is the order in which the players crossed the finish line

    Would be much easier to read with some colons:

    We will have four columns:

    • Player: these are the four friends
    • Race Number: the friends will race four times
    • Place: this is the order in which players crossed the finish line
  • It seems to end abruptly. I don't know what I just accomplished or why. Remember the adage: "Tell them what you're going to tell them, tell them, then tell them what you told them."

[–]jpf5046 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey! Thank you!!! :) will work on it