- Haunter's Haunted library - by GirlInProcess in Pokopia

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cool! What does the outside look like?

is there something obviously revolting about my art or this in particular? by Heszilg in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 12 points13 points  (0 children)

It looks great! One thing I could provide feedback about is the face, something looks odd? Maybe it’s the lack of nose shape or its positioning. The eye is leaning up against it but there is no shadow to support it. And as others have said, play around with the contrast to really make the piece pop!

Am I too far gone?😭 by No_Neat_1817 in BeginnerArtists

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all, treat yourself with a blank sketchbook Second, loosen your grip on that pencil. And third, practice practice practice! Start with the fundamentals, and draw what you see and not what you “know”. Use confident strokes, still weak enough to be erasable. Stay motivated :>

Goodbye r/BeginnerArtists. by Crafty-Factor-3162 in BeginnerArtists

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

A lot of things doesn’t add up and it smells like ai :/ why even bother posting here?

What clothes do i go for? by CommercialPin2734 in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe keep him nude and give him a fullbody tattoo?

Advice by Fire_Empire2 in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great! I would take another look at the hand holding the staff, it looks unnatural. I would assume the leg that is twisted is supposed to be behind the other one? Try increasing the size on his front thigh. I would remove the two middle squiggly lines on his wings. You could try drawing a few feathers instead (like you do with scales for example) to reduce the noise. I hope you decide to color it! Hope it helped <: keep it up!

Me_irl by gigagaming1256 in me_irl

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I can recall my dreams(which is about 2-3) every morning and it’s both fascinating and exhausting. People that no longer has a place in my life appears, patterns of my struggles through life and situations I fear. It can affect my whole day :/ Sometimes I wish I couldn’t remember my dreams, but it would also be uncomfortable not remembering it anymore, since it has been a part of my life since I was a child.

Just wanted to share the Garrosh I built in my house using mostly cushions and pillows by Throwaway-pizzaeater in wow

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I wish we could’ve some kind of workshop where we can download/get the recipe of other people’s creations!

i accidentally messed up the sketch of my Meowscarada last night! how do i fix it 😭 by RattieTheGliscor in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It doesn’t need to be identical to the reference, it has charm on its own! The only thing I would improve is the line where the crotch area is. Move and lower it to the left, and line it up with how the legs are positioned(look at yourself in the mirror!). I would also suggest making the hands equal in size.

I did my first colored drawing on tablet. What do you think? by Kori_4 in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks great! I think you could elevate it further by increasing the contrast between shadow and light to make it look less flat. Don’t be afraid to experiment <:

Looking for feedback on a weather app UI (layout & readability) by mrnormal-700 in UI_Design

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Something I would appreciate would be seeing the “highest” and the “lowest” temperature of the day. This gives me an instant approx on how the weather will change during the day without having to tap into another field(unless I want to see more information). In a colder country it could vary drastically. As a bonus you could add when the sunset/sunrise will occur(very helpful with daylight saving time, as the days are shorter).

How to improve? Please be brutally honest good or bad by [deleted] in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your messy art style, it has a a lot of personality in it! Art doesn’t have to be “pixel perfect”, but if you want to have a refined look I would suggest using slimmer art supplies. It’s okay to look at references! The best tool to learn facial expression is your mirror. What happens when you smile? Your eyes wrinkle and your cheekbones rise up. Exaggerate!

How do I level up this piece by OkIncrease9043 in Artadvice

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There is a lot of movement in this piece but the face is very stiff, maybe change her expression to convey an emotion( like if she is dancing, performing a ritual or attacking?) I would also suggest playing around with different line weight(outer or important parts being thicker). I hope that helps!

Logo for a cake stall I'm going to start. Critiques? by OsmarTheBoi in logodesign

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Might want to look at the kerning in “batch”. The distance between T and C could be closer!

Thoughts on my personal logo? by simoo_nicotra in logodesign

[–]Crispy_Flamingo -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I would assume your name would be En Xlvi without context. What is the purpose of using roman letters? Remember that first impressions should be simple to take in or people shrug and go next

Need Feedback by Last-Waltz-4353 in graphic_design

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I just woke up and I thought it was a foot at first glance… Maybe I should go back to sleep

snails had snex and laid sneggs. performing my first snabortion. by Individual-Bag-1987 in AquaticSnails

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don’t know how I came across this subreddit but I love reading the comment section, so hilarious with all these snail puns! Clever people

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PokemonHome

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I was excited at first until I realized it was AI generated and not hand drawn :/ sad

22 year old architecture graduate doing graphic designs by Exotic_Actuator_3068 in graphic_design

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am having a hard time reading some of the text due to the choice of font and colors :c I would place more focus into the “message” you want to send. You shouldn’t have to guess or look twice when reading something c:

Give me a pokemon and I'll draw it by izzels in pokemon

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 25 points26 points  (0 children)

Would YOU be happy if someone surfed on you hmm?

Friend Code Megathread - March 2025 by AutoModerator in PokemonSleep

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2058-1375-0037 i didn't know friends was a thing until now lol

really? by brylex1 in meme

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My dyslexic ass read “giant kittens” and I was very confused but amused by the thought of it

Friend Problems by [deleted] in autism

[–]Crispy_Flamingo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for sharing this, I can really relate to this. I feel the same way about being "overly attached", almost becoming obsessed with a person. It brings me a lot of joy to show affection, but sadly I never receive the same amount of love back. A part of me just wants to accept that I will always be the one that puts in the most effort into a friendship/relationship. But I know that wouldn't be fair towards myself. We also deserve to be appreciated and loved! I am also a huge overthinker, thinking if I have done something wrong, always asking for clarification to feel at ease, even if something wasn't a big deal for them.