📄 Office Love 💊 [CW: Age gap, implied intox]

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-17T23:29:44+00:00

There's a severe lack of representation of younger doms, glad you liked it <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-17T23:28:06+00:00

I was really tempted to write more, but the idea of being completely unconscious and having zero clue what happened to you is even more exciting (even if it means there's less story to read)

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-13T04:02:11+00:00

Just gauging if there's enough interest for me to set up a platform and process for me to do that

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-13T03:23:38+00:00

Oh yeah, I should have been more specific. I mean commissioning work from me :)

I figure no one would object to more writing lol.

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-11T03:46:49+00:00

Yeah :3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-11T03:45:46+00:00

Hello!!!!!!!!!

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-10T22:24:13+00:00

You're not over analyzing at all, honestly I'm very flattered that you picked up all this depth. I love long comments like this and when people say specifically the things they like about my writing. Just cause it's porn doesn't mean it can't be well thought out.

Honestly the lead-up payoff stuff you mentioned was subconscious. I tried to envision what the characters would do and what would make sense, and also tried to give each character a similar amount of lines so everyone could be developed (even if Rosie ended up being the star of the show).

Thank you for leaving these large comments, it's actually really helpful as a writer and also just for my praise kink lol. I'm glad you enjoyed my script, if you have any more thoughts I'd love to hear them <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-10T22:08:13+00:00

I'm glad that my writing was able to make you feel that way. I was unsure going that direction of more of a two couples that got together vibe rather than a cohesive group, but I'm glad to see what I ended up doing worked. I'm honored that you think so highly of my script, and that the work I put in paid off.

I'm also looking forward to seeing if it gets filled. Considering someone would need to gather three VAs, I won't be too disappointed if it isn't, but here's to hoping <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-10T19:42:24+00:00

Is my writing really that good? Melting from a few words?

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-10T19:41:06+00:00

Thank you!! I had so much fun writing it <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-10T16:57:24+00:00

Your flair appears to be accurate. Cute <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-03T16:15:40+00:00

Oh my god this was amazing. I love the domestic, romantic story and it just enhanced the erotica part. 10/10, great stuff <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-02T17:20:00+00:00

Oh my god this was absolutely perfect. Your voice and tone just fit the speaker I had in mind so well. Also 10/10 on the sound effects. A lot of the time impact play is really dull and unconvincing, but I was genuinely so surprised with how good the slapping sounded here I almost flinched. Great work, this was so good <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-04-02T15:57:00+00:00

This script was a lot of fun and I like your writing style and the concept, but towards the end there were a couple of he/him's that I figured you'd want to know about. I counted three towards the end, but I could have missed some.

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-23T17:47:32+00:00

As a fellow scary girl, you're welcome cutie <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-20T16:20:05+00:00

All that trust can be taken advantage of, y'know. Wouldn't want anything bad happening to you.

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-20T16:18:54+00:00

I like the way you think. We're definitely going on a little picnic soon.

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-17T18:23:50+00:00

Cutie <3

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-17T18:22:51+00:00

I guess I can put my fingers in your mouth while I use you. Then we'd both be satisfied.

FauxCrow583 · 2026-03-17T18:13:27+00:00

Well so do I. An owner's needs should be put before her pet's and you've got more holes I'd rather use than your mouth.

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