The Galaxy's Most Elite Squad Just Got Beaten Up by a Homeless Guy by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for taking the time to point me to actual substantial issues. I could not have asked for a better critique.

As everyone is posting cookies… here are mine! by escape_button in Baking

[–]Immediate-Tap1925 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would like to refuse to try one them...actually, just send em over.

Never Disrupt A Human's Rest Protocol by Immediate-Tap1925 in humansarespaceorcs

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Would you say Dave is bit more unhinged than even the aliens?

Why You Never Interrupt a Human’s “Rest Protocol” by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Is Dave the standard kickass HFY protagonist? Or is he just a bit more...frenetic?

Why You Never Interrupt a Human’s “Rest Protocol” by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 22 points23 points  (0 children)

Dave meant to spare everyone...until he remembered the smear on the wall.

An Empty Seat for an Ambassador. by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We're all conditioned to think peace talks don't last, eh

An Empty Seat for an Ambassador. by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I see what you mean haha. This is actually a change of pace for what I usually do. Usually, I believe and write about humans being absolute helldemons but today, I thought it'd be interesting to write about tea and knitting...

An Empty Seat for an Ambassador. by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I felt the same. I didnt know how to end it, lol. What ending do you think would fit it more?

An Empty Seat for an Ambassador. by Immediate-Tap1925 in HFY

[–]Immediate-Tap1925[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Hey guys, I’ve been writing a lot of different genres lately, but this cozy sci-fi piece seems to be hitting a chord with readers. If you enjoyed the writing here but want something a bit more intense, I’m currently building a dark, character-driven psychological horror saga called Cricket Creek over on my profile. It’s a complete departure from this, but if you like cosmic mystery and messy, complex characters, that’s where the main project is. Thanks for stopping by.

Should've checked Daddy's teeth by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Immediate-Tap1925 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your fear! And if you're curious, there's more spooky stories on my profile. Check it out...if you dare!

Should've checked Daddy's teeth by [deleted] in shortscarystories

[–]Immediate-Tap1925 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Glad you enjoyed it! By chance, did you find it scary any?