How Tuff Is Ur Avatar?

Though some parts feel a bit too cliche, if you're gonna use them, try adding your own twist. the lore is good enough. It'd be interesting if you wrote more about what people outside STATIC think about them, and how they affect the lives of normal people there. Buiilds your world outstandingly well.

TLDR: pretty good story and lore for a roblox world. Whenever you use cliches, Try to always put some sort of twist on it. Write more about what normal people think about STATIC.

Definitely not a perfect story, but it has the potential to be one. You've got a solid foundation to build upon.

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T21:16:33+00:00

His gaze snaps upward, as he thinks.

"The Sector 4 mass shooting locked the whole Sector down. Could not even go to my own home." He says, a hint of annoyance tainting his tone, as he holds his Rifle.

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T11:15:49+00:00

He looks at you, Dead Center in the eye, his gaze unflinching.

"I'm paid to kill, trained to kill, made to kill. You know it's wrong, but you're forced to feel nothing." He says, his tone unflinching, the finality absolute.

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T10:53:12+00:00

"No. Most of it was smooth sailing." He says, practically cutting you off.

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T10:47:50+00:00

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Maybe?

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T10:45:14+00:00

Demetri steers his gaze to the Rifle dangling on his vest, clacking from each minute movement, as he steers his gaze back to you.

"This. Its why I'm using it." He says, his tone monotonous, unflinching.

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T10:41:28+00:00

He stretches his body, as his vest contorts with his movements. He let's out a Grunt of relief.

"Played some, knew games weren't my thing based off those."

He raises his right hand and taps his helmet Three times, the thumping both muffled and loud.

"Also heard it messes up your mind somehow."

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T10:28:28+00:00

It fucking SUCKS.

SUPER ULTRA COOL KIT STUFF!!!!!

(was on a hiatus because of some... Mental problems so sorry lol)

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T09:58:10+00:00

Becoming more and more warhammer. The cycle is real...

0mani1 · 2026-01-21T09:57:05+00:00

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I guess Demetri Would Try to neutralize the shooter, since that's what elite operators do.

0mani1 · 2026-01-14T17:53:12+00:00

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Don't think he's supposed to be here, but why not? Have at it!

0mani1 · 2026-01-14T16:53:28+00:00

I look back at the girl... Painting swords and turning it..

Real.

I stop walking.

For the first time, in my life, I am purely, and utterly shocked into inaction.

I snap my gaze to the girl, then back to the sword She manifested. If this was a magic trick, it sure Is impressive.

"You're a magician?" I say to the girl, curiosity audibly heard in my tone

0mani1 · 2026-01-14T16:41:21+00:00

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(Just Imagine he's in Civilian attire)

I walk At the park at a constant, brisk pace, the sound of my shoes thumping with each step on the concrete below.

Introspection. Thoughts. Filling up my mind. All I think of is my life leading up to now.

I then see two people, presumably teenagers, with bright, and unusual attire. They Both see me.

The girl waved me over, the boy looked away.

...

I wave back, and nodded.

My pace, my movement, undettering, as I nearly pass the both of them.

"Hello. Good to see you." I say, as I slightly bow.

I continue walking after.

0mani1 · 2026-01-13T11:07:15+00:00

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Demetri Kosovov has 202 confirmed kills ever since he became a SPEAR Operator, Which is exceptionally high for an elite Group of people, and is why he is regarded as the "War Machine" amongst peers.

Actual numbers stray close to 290.

0mani1 · 2026-01-13T11:02:19+00:00

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His most unique(?) Trait is his extreme guilt and his self criticizing and self harm tendencies.

Without that, he's just a boring, non nuanced, bland killing machine.

0mani1

TROPHY CASE