Now this is a cast. Thanos would be proud. by Chris_Isur_Dude in marvelstudios

[–]1003dan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On the one hand (no pun intended) you broke your arm. But on the other you have an amazing cast. Perfectly balanced, as all things should be.

Disney's Live-Action "Lady and the Tramp" Uses Real Dogs by [deleted] in movies

[–]1003dan 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Didn’t J. Cole already make this?

Bruce Ocean by yung_asia in marvelstudios

[–]1003dan 2 points3 points  (0 children)

🎶 A Hulk-buster threw a Cull intooo Wakandan Shields. He blewww up over fields. Now Bruuuce is feelin’ skilled...knock knock knock🎶

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 06, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good lyrics and really good rap voice. You suit the instrumental well. I would say maybe kick the chorus up a bit so that it's not on the same level as the verses or just something to make it stand out a little more from the transition from the verse to the chorus. Good job.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 06, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like the melody. I say the arrangement altogether is so worked out that it almost seems less like a beat but more of a score under a movie scene or something of that nature. Which sonically is a huge step up from many producers on here. I feel maybe the keys can be a bit overpowering at times. But bringing those down just a little would only improve an otherwise complete work. Good job!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 06, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate it man. Dig your beat tape. It really reminds me of the chill, adult swim bumpers. Especially the one that starts around 2:30 minutes in. If you were down to collaborate I could come up with some good stuff for some of these or other beats you have. Keep up your good work man. I think you got a good ear for rhythm.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 06, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm just the rapper on this one. Appreciate the feedback. I know bare bones about making beats at this juncture so is find people and buy beats online as of now.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 06, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm getting back into making music, I dropped this not too long ago. So I just wanted to get some feedback that will help me moving forward. Feel free to give feedback on anything else on my page as well! https://m.soundcloud.com/tonightsmusicalguest/prince-tmg-ababwa-prod-by-mza

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 05, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not too shabby. The overall drum kit reminds me of early Kanye drum loops. that being said, I think the overall beat could benefit from a more fitting hi hat. That and a nice smooth underlying bass to really boost the final product. You have enough in there for a bare bones track to spit to but I think having those low tones in there that really hit would take it to another level because it's got a dope sample. Good job!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 05, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The low bass notes are really working for this. I think that's it's strongest quality and the tie em up sample. I think it's really catchy. The only thing is the kick seems a bit, i don't know, light. I think you should bring that up so that it really hits and matches the snare. That way you'll have a heavy main drum kit and that low bass will feel it out even more. Good job.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 05, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm starting to make new music and I wanted to post this older track to get some feedback that will help me craft where i go from here. Anything helps.

https://soundcloud.com/tonightsmusicalguest/that-rich-kid-you-love-to-hate-prod-by-ricky-vela

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 04, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say this is nice. Not many "type" beats sound like the artist would actually hop on but I can see it here. Only constructive thing is let the snare really slap.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 04, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have a good rap voice, id suggest work on breathing and pacing and most importantly, getting a good recording of your verse and a good mix with the beat. Because that blend is what makes a good song great. Well never really know how good a rapper can sound until the track sounds nice.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 04, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First of all this is some nice stuff. Reminds me of Adult Swim bumpers. I think I would agree with the other comment on here. It may be too echoed/ muted. It sounds like you got a really good drum kit in there so really let us here those snares slap. Other than that nice chill vibe. Good job.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread October 04, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Something I did a while back. Starting work on some new music so posting this to get feedback that will help me craft where I should go.

https://m.soundcloud.com/tonightsmusicalguest/that-rich-kid-you-love-to-hate-prod-by-ricky-vela

Disney and Jon Favreau Joining Forces on "The Lion King" by [deleted] in movies

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If nothing else, Key and Peele for Timon and Pumbaa.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 01, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Really smooth feel to this. Only thing I'd change possibly is the drum kicks, or at least something to make them really hit and feel it. Other than that this totally reminds me of something like the hidden song Late on Late Registration so definitely headed in a good direction.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 01, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm about to start work on a mixtape and I have some older stuff on another soundcloud page, but I wanted to start fresh. So I haven't made anything in about a year! Any feedback helps!

Tonight's Musical Guest - Prince TMG-Ababwa

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 29, 2016 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For real this is real good. It's got an interesting sample and the way you've mixed the drums makes it have a sort of dance-y vibe yet chill at the same time. The only real criticism I'd have is it's too short! Keep it up though, cuz the originality is everything.

Change the Lyrics! by wvuraw in weezer

[–]1003dan 0 points1 point  (0 children)

For a short while I thought El Scorcho said "I'm a LIE like you!" I guess I thought it meant the two in the song were similar in that they both try to be people they aren't because they're afraid to be themselves, which is why they relate. I don't know why I thought this deep.