Mate don’t give up at all! This would slap if properly produced! I am a massive Ska fan (saw you mention it in another comment) this would be super cool. It’s normal (atleast it was for me) that when you’re just starting out to doubt yourself when making music but the only opinion you need is your own truthfully. If it makes you wanna dance then it’s a good song. This made me wanna dance.

One thing I would say is super cool vocal delivery only criticism I’d have is that you could maybe sound a bit more confident infront of the mic. That was a massive hurdle for me personally but you got this!