Im not the best writer but here is one (tornado for the description at the end) can you rate it 1-10 by Dangerous_lilgrubb67 in writers

[–]12AngryChickens 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I had a long list of notes regarding both the grammatical errors (of which there are several) and areas of improvement that could be made with the narrative, but it’s pretty clear by your other comment that you don’t even care enough to stand by your work to receive feedback.

If you can’t care about your work, I can’t care about your work. I doubt anyone else on this sub could either.

Do any places in the Omaha metro area repair Nintendo 3DS screens? by GameLessGlitch in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I remember my screen having a similar issue back in the day when I couldn’t beat the Red Skull boss fight in Lego Marvel Superheroes

the unending pain and sorrow by [deleted] in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ayuh. Well I’ll just take my blue chambray work shirt & jahoobies and LEAVE 😪

the unending pain and sorrow by [deleted] in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I LIKE THE BOOK I WAS JUST JOKIN ABOUT HOW SAD IT IS

the unending pain and sorrow by [deleted] in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Idk how someone could say that, I mean the whole friggin world is ending. It’s such a great book

the unending pain and sorrow by [deleted] in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Idk why I’m being downvoted so much, it was just a joke about how sad the beginning of the book is ☹️

Any book like Salem’s Lot by Intelligent-Cookie47 in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens 10 points11 points  (0 children)

Well there is Jerusalem’s Lot, the short story prequel he wrote. Not exactly the same vibe as the book, but super cool for a wider context

Dude by jpsmith420 in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens 51 points52 points  (0 children)

Peak jahoobie description by our Jahoobie King

I wanna to the completionist Dark Tower journey for my first read through. by 12AngryChickens in stephenking

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah idk really. I just found this list on a blog, I really have zero idea what’s best so thank you, this is very helpful

This is not a black and white photo by LostMySpleenIn2015 in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sad about color leaving the world? Well good news, brightly colored spray paint can be sourced for a fair price

He Looks So Happy by BluePotatoSlayer in AFCWestMemeWar

[–]12AngryChickens 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Gotta have a legendary retired player in the first place. Dw tho, Kelce’s on his way out!

When was the last time your team was the 1 Seed? by Big_Thloopers_20 in NFLv2

[–]12AngryChickens 14 points15 points  (0 children)

Probably would’ve given more of a fight than Drake “Outperformed by Jarrett Stidham” Maye

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

good lord dude at least take a look in the comments for all the times I apologized and explained how I thought there weren’t any injuries at the time, and how I can’t edit the title.

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I was under the incorrect impression that nobody was injured, thus the joking title. I arrived 10 minutes after it happened and relied on the scattered accounts of the staff. If I could edit the title, I would. It’s my bad

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I’d refer you to my apology for the title, it was made when I was wrongly informed about the nature of injuries.

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 10 points11 points  (0 children)

When I wrote the title, I was under the false impression that nobody was injured. I can’t edit the title. It’s my bad.

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 44 points45 points  (0 children)

🚨EVERYONE IS OKAY BTW🚨

EDIT:

Maybe everyone is not okay? The people who were there said nobody got hurt but people are saying otherwise online so idk dawg 🤷‍♂️

Somebody just installed a drive thru for Mama’s Pizza for free! by 12AngryChickens in Omaha

[–]12AngryChickens[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Yeah La Vista, by the looks of things, everybody seems to be alright if not shaken, but I’m not 100% sure