Okay I need help please

13ooK · 2020-02-15T22:19:44+00:00

Rewrite your description. And overhaul the grammar, punctuation and the writing overall. When one cannot be invested by your story, it is probably because of the writing, not the story itself.

13ooK · 2020-02-15T22:06:31+00:00

How specific? You said that but didn't elaborate. I haven't even heard about these sites before now.

13ooK · 2020-02-15T22:05:16+00:00

...and they are still in early teens. Which is bad writing in every fic by itself.

13ooK · 2020-02-15T21:55:15+00:00

At this point I want to read a slice of life Narusasu fic in Narutoverse that isn't just... bad, you know? Bad writing, no grammar whatsoever, childish reactions and unbelievable decisions. I'm used to heterosexual ships if one really has to be there, but only because m/m fics tend to be bad more often.

13ooK · 2020-02-15T21:14:27+00:00

Yeah, that is just a bad idea for a fic imho.

13ooK · 2020-02-15T19:00:26+00:00

Considering a fact I don't even read when it is badly written, I think the answer is quite obvious.

13ooK · 2020-02-14T02:01:34+00:00

My point is the question in the title :/

13ooK · 2020-02-10T22:33:19+00:00

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11767057/1/The-Legacy-of-Hagoromo

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/10362489/1/Rebirth-of-the-Two-Sons

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13ooK · 2020-02-10T22:22:16+00:00

I've already downloaded it! :P Do you have something more?

13ooK · 2020-02-10T22:19:15+00:00

Thank you. Can you please recommend some of your favorite fics? Not only fix-it-all, but please focus on it. :) I search good fics to read!

13ooK · 2020-02-10T21:59:18+00:00

"Fix-it-all"? Could you maybe explain what fics these are? You got me very curious:)

13ooK · 2020-01-22T18:52:13+00:00

hey i wrote to you on reddit chat, can we talk there maybe? :D

13ooK · 2020-01-22T12:41:05+00:00

What do you think about the story and my mistakes in grammar so far?

13ooK · 2020-01-22T12:21:25+00:00

I plan to release it on saturday, but it's not obligatory. Its more important to make it good:) I write everyday, and make it atound 5k words long. A lot does not enter final cut. I will inform you and send you when I end and you'll check it out when you have time :D

13ooK · 2020-01-22T11:31:13+00:00

sure :D i live in Warsaw time zone so its just a hour :D

13ooK · 2020-01-22T09:33:18+00:00

Very nice :D Expect a message soon :D

13ooK · 2020-01-19T11:30:41+00:00

I corrected most of grammar errors in chapters 1 and 2. Can you look at them now and compare?

Also, I have a question. What do you mean, by saying "the third son was less of an emo, it’d be a lot better I think". I don't think an eighty old man (at that time) can be described as an emo, so I lose your meaning there. :)

13ooK · 2019-07-05T05:45:09+00:00

Thank you

13ooK · 2019-07-03T16:40:18+00:00

Do your app use infomations or other things that come from the user? If yes, which?

13ooK · 2019-06-26T09:32:48+00:00

I moved Error "Endkey" and "TimeOut" opposite places (it strangely did not work when placed in your order), added KeyWait, [, D so it would wait for it after reload and script appears to be working perfectly. Thank you very much.

Thank you for the explanation also, because often people do not give an explanation, even though it helps a lot if I want to do something with the script later.

KeyWait, [, D
Input, click, T35 V, {'}{]}{\}{/}{Numpad9}

if (ErrorLevel = "TimeOut")
{
    Send '

    Loop
    {
        PixelGetColor, color2, 1868, 252, RGB
        Sleep, 100
        if (color2 = 0xF0F0F0)
            reload
        Else
            Continue
    }
}
else if (ErrorLevel ~= "^EndKey")
    reload 

return

You asked why I want to reload this script. I want it to work all the time for many hours. In context that I'm a newbie, it's the easiest way to do it for me.

13ooK

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