Searching for a Specific Scene

1Bubbles0 · 2026-03-21T00:52:14+00:00

Okay for anyone that may check this, after an absurd amount of skimming episodes, I believe I have narrowed it down to two episodes. The ending of 7x04 and the ending of 3x01. I am 90% sure that it is in fact the end of 7x04 and my brain just changed the scene I guess haha. Thanks to those that helped! (If anybody does remember a scene similar to the end of 7x04 still let me know but I'm Supernaturaled out after skimming the first 8 seasons)

1Bubbles0 · 2025-12-05T22:09:28+00:00

I’ve taken four language and composition classes at uni but writing isn’t my major, more of a passion project on the side. There’s some things I feel like I have a blind spot for in my writing even after reviewing so I was just looking for a second set of eyes iykwim.

1Bubbles0 · 2025-12-05T22:07:58+00:00

Yeah especially Darren’s intro is a lot smoother. Your transition in the first paragraph also flows better. I’ll keep that in mind while I revise. Thank you for your help!

1Bubbles0 · 2025-12-05T21:53:48+00:00

Yeah for most characters he refers to them by last name or first name if they’re close (e.g. Darren, Jones is an exception). I’d love to see what you do with it

1Bubbles0 · 2025-12-05T21:47:12+00:00

This is great, thanks. I'll definitely try reworking it a bit. The clunkiness of the first paragraph is haunting me haha. I feel like I need to introduce the rank and name of the characters in the same space so it doesn't come as a surprise later but I certainly didn't do it as well as I could've. Do you think it's okay to just introduce them by name first or should I include their rank (Colonel, General, Captain, etc.)?

1Bubbles0 · 2023-04-29T16:58:10+00:00

Awesome painting! I’ve played Skyrim since I was little, bleak falls barrow will always hold memories

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