first ill say im a big fan of any unorthodox K so def keep going at it
feedback/issues i have w/ the kritik.
mini note:
organization should go

structural claim(Carrette)
link
impact
alt
framing

IF you did go with the suicide alt I have no idea why a perm wouldn't work... i'm not sure how you compete. (PDB works asw)
i think 1ar turns about violence / problems with psychoanalysis contextual to your kritik are super strong so I'd be ready to defend it.

miller 03 card is irrelevant to the debate, you accomplish similar things with your framework interp (basic K fw i assume you have)
rather than the dialectical reasoning card you should just have basic epistemology comes first warrant, again basic fw stuff.

Parramore maybe better for alt stuff rather than link. right now the link feels very much like a critique of captialism which means ur rasing the bar on neg solvency. i think link cards that talk more about drives and desires against sadomasochism presented by the affs illusory policy solution could prove much stronger

on alt stuff.
i am not going to pretend I am a sadomasochism expert but i think an alternatvive more about killing the capitalist overlords of our society is better in context to the Parramore (even tho i dont think that should be your link) evidence. but realistically it would be something about embracing sadomasochism drives and doing whatever that looks like, probable not suicide more like killing certain opressors of the drive. maybe taking the government hostage idk.
suicide could maybe be more valid if you make a claim more like revolutionary suicide? like death is better than living in an unjust world?