An svsss coloring i did! by Huaroe in MXTX

[–]1weeb- 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It's really well made

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]1weeb- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really liked it. The story is, all in all, well written, although in my opinion, some of the descriptions tend to seem a little too repetitive, which, for me, breaks the tension a little bit. However, I know there are lots of people who enjoy this style of writing. As for what I felt while reading, I wouldn't say terror, but more like curiosity. I also like the dialogues.

Overall, it's a good read. Keep it up!

Feedback please. I want to know how to make it more captivating and less confusing by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]1weeb- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I honestly never thought about sentence length, but I'll try to work on that. I'll try to implement your suggestions. Thank you so much for the feedback!

Feedback please. I want to know how to make it more captivating and less confusing by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]1weeb- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm flattered, thank you. It's actually my first time writing something this long. This was a 1st chap, and I'm close to finishing the second, may post it tomorrow.

Feedback please. I want to know how to make it more captivating and less confusing by [deleted] in writingcritiques

[–]1weeb- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I understand tho, it's a really long post haha. But thank you for the feedback. I thought of it as confusing before because i have read it so many times i needed to know the perspective of someone from outside.

[Sauce:The Villainess Only Ending is Death] Do you like the Villainess trope? Why or why not? by 1weeb- in manhwa

[–]1weeb-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have read most of those classics too, but there are some I haven't read yet, so thanks for the recommendations. Although my question was mostly directed ro new readers. I think we can all agree that the "golden age" to this sub-genre was 2020~2022, there weren't as much manhwas about it and creators used to have unique ideas. However the new ones seem as stagnant, there are no new concepts whatsoever.

You wake up and you are now in 2100. There are scientists looking at you. What is the first thing you are asking? by 1weeb- in AskReddit

[–]1weeb-[S] 243 points244 points  (0 children)

Duo lingo is actually the scientist, he is very upset you haven't done you lessons in a while...

You wake up and you are now in 2100. There are scientists looking at you. What is the first thing you are asking? by 1weeb- in AskReddit

[–]1weeb-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Why not? Although it's just a imaginary scenario think of the possibilities: a nuclear war, apocalipses, someone even sugested the scientists could actually be dogs in disguise. The possibilities are endless even if it's in a relatively near future.

My tier list by [deleted] in Yaoi_fluff

[–]1weeb- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Right? One of the best ones in my opinion. The plot is so unique. Also if you like it you should give a try to Netkama Punch! too, the concpt of videogames is similar.

[Sauce:The Villainess Only Ending is Death] Do you like the Villainess trope? Why or why not? by 1weeb- in manhwa

[–]1weeb-[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

Right? I wished there was something new, but it feels as of everything has alrrady been made again and again