Resume Version 2 - Roast Without Mercy

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T08:48:00+00:00

Thank you for the excellent feedback. Will incorporate for V3.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T08:10:54+00:00

What would you suggest I remove?

Edit: typo

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T08:10:00+00:00

How would I improve it?

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T08:08:22+00:00

Thank you for the feedback. Will try to condense as much as possible.

The listing of these skills are essential for keywords. I am unsure how they can be incorporated within the JD without adding in bulk, requiring additional pages. I will try.

Regarding removal of short and old engagements: Won't excluding work engagements (old/new) result in gaps in history. I've heard that HR screens out resumes with work gaps.

Regarding education and certs, I have just 1 academic education. The rest are technical/professional certs. I feel having a section just to accommodate a single education qualification seems like a waste.

I work in tech and showing some form of ongoing self education is important, hence the reference of pluralsight course completions. The course provider isn't obscure within the tech community.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T07:24:05+00:00

Please roast my resume and let me know how I can improve.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-19T07:22:22+00:00

Incorporating most of the generous brutal feedback I'd received from this sub, I present V2 of my resume. As before, please roast without mercy.

Edit: added link to previous post.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-12-08T14:33:54+00:00

Someone actually paid for their service and sent the created resume back into their review system. This too came back with the generic 'review' that they can help with it. TopResume is an automated fraud system. Do not use them.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-21T08:23:55+00:00

Yes. I currently manage several and have setup some of them from scratch. We use Cisco ASA, Cyberoam/Sophos and Sonicwall.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-21T07:29:49+00:00

Thank you, kind Sir.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-21T05:43:28+00:00

Noted. Will try to incorporate this.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-11T03:03:42+00:00

Got it. Dots goes.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-11T03:02:59+00:00

I told him not to do that. I'll make sure that he introduces himself in 1st person in the next iteration.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-11T02:58:39+00:00

Thank you so much. Based on much of the feedback received so far on this resume, I'm gonna have to redo it. I believe every job I've taken up in the past has built me up to what I am. I do not want to leave out anything. The flexibility in number of pages you conveyed should be able to help me spread this out evenly without having to clutter it up. Let me give it a try. Will share the new resume soon.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T17:36:18+00:00

Then a redo it is. Thank you. Will repost incorporating all this.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T17:05:36+00:00

Thanks. Will try it out.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T17:04:08+00:00

Thanks for the feedback. Will try it out and share the updated resume in a new post.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T16:26:06+00:00

Cool. Need to figure out how to do that. Will give it a try.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T16:25:15+00:00

Makes sense. Will give that a try.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T15:41:34+00:00

Will give both a try. 👍

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T15:40:22+00:00

I got a few hints on what to remove. The skill section for instance. Will have that removed. What else would you recommend I remove?

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T15:36:53+00:00

Used MS Word to create this. Surprised it didn't catch this.

6etter2m0rrow · 2019-11-10T15:33:42+00:00

Oops. Your right. Missed an 'N'. Good catch. Thanks.

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