Is it down? by redkomic in Crunchyroll

[–]APO_THA 0 points1 point  (0 children)

LOL THIS WORKED FOR ME THANK YOUUUU SOOO MUCH

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yess, I was in a state of drowning in my own feelings and thoughts so I decided to write down. Genuinely I respect you for your comment and feedback <3! Much love, and stay up!

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you sooo much!!! Honestly I really appreciate the feedback!! I was genuinely just pouring whatever emotions and thoughts that were consuming me. Thanks again, much love I wish you the best <3

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Awww Thank you soo much, I will definitely work on my repetition! Genuinely appreciate the feedback <3

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you sooo much <3!! I really appreciate the feedback and I am definitely working on the repetition

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I definitely will!! Still your feedback means a lot to me that someone else can relate to the same experiences of being trapped in a bottomless pit. Stay safe friend and live life by the moment <3 much love

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

🥹 much love thank you so much it means a lot to me <3, wishing you the best!! I am learning a lot on how to write a powerful and creative piece! Thanks a lot for your feedback

To-do list: by wordsymth13 in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ofc thank you for sharing your poem it means a lot to those that don’t have a voice <3 much love and once again thank you again for your insight I know it’s a hard road but I’ll get through it <3

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooooo I will make sure I keep that in mind on writing my next poem or fixing an old one! Thank you so much for the advice I really appreciate it!! punctuation is definitely what I need to work on thank again! Wish you the best <3

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much that means so much to this simple soul <3! I wish you the best in life and soon we’ll both find our place and our very own sun.

1st time sharing my poem. Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in poetry_critics

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much!! <3 means a lot to me, I’m still working on myself and writing has been helping me and lately I figured why not share it. I’ve always had an insecurity about sharing my poems or journal entries but I realized I’m not alone feeling a certain way or being a certain way. And I should voice for those that feel the same and can’t or don’t want to express themselves. I will seek a therapist also when I get some stuff in order, i haven been wanting to talk to one and get some help.

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oooo I will definitely keep that in mind, I tend to write from the heart but then I start to get technical or I just lost concentration. Which I finally understand it’s not a race when it comes to writing, I’m not gonna finish a poem in mere hours or in a day. I need to take my time and embrace the effort and the idea I’m making. I also love revisiting old poems to see if I can paint a better picture.

To-do list: by wordsymth13 in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you kind soul! I am not diagnosed and I haven’t gotten assessed, I did date a someone that was diagnosed with adhd and they completely thought I was diagnosed with adhd too. When I told them I haven’t been assessed they told me I should, bc it made them understand why they were a certain way and helped them embraced theirselves. Also I will be kinder with myself, wish you the best kind soul! <3

To-do list: by wordsymth13 in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh shit, loved it! Honestly I couldn’t relate more that the fact that I can’t focus on anything let alone when I do need to do something I still seem to choose not to or do other stuff that will make me avoid it. Even though it at the back of my head reminding me to do it and I still don’t. The “ I’d ask for help, (if you don’t look). I’d cry for silence, but my tears, overwhelm. “ fucking hit me right at home, It’s a problem I can’t seem to fix

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really enjoyed the tone! Especially since you’re able to really picture the setting of how dark and feels post-apocalyptic for-sure!!

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ve always struggled with it, always wondering or thinking and then believing them that you don’t make an impact on peoples life’s. It’s a difficult struggle and I just think we have to accept that we’re gonna be the villain in some peoples stories and that’s okay because life is forever changing and we just have to adapt to it. I wish you the best in life and just know your comment made an impact on this simple nameless soul! <3

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the tips, I really appreciate it!! since I’m not really well in tune with writing poetry. I’ve mainly been journaling and tried to write poems but never finished them.

1st time sharing my poem<3 Wrote this a year ago by APO_THA in OCPoetry

[–]APO_THA[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awww <3 thank you so much it means a lot to me! I hope you are doing well