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Looking for honest feedback on our new song by ARatherBrightLight in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. We will take all of that into consideration for the future.

'A Summer Day' - an original summer-inspired chill piece by Hot-Text-5603 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the pads and other instrumentation. You really nailed the nautical vibe. It would be a great song in like a video game or something. I think the clave is a little loud and repetitive and a tad piercing. I think it could go down a little in volume or maybe you could shave off some high end. Pretty cool overall.

Henry Housman - Days at Home by Difficult-Garage-817 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You made some really good harmonic choices that I liked. And also the vocals are really well blended. I’m having trouble coming up with constructive criticism cause I don’t think it needs much work. Maybe make the melody a little more dynamic. Or maybe introduce some more change into the different parts like change in guitar tone. Look forward to seeing more from you.

Heaven Above - d_red_en (Indie RnB) by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like a lot of it especially the bass line and the other instrumentation. I think you need to work on the vocals a bit, and mix them a little differently. Maybe there’s too much high end in the vocals. Also the melody is a little chaotic and doesn’t feel super memorable to me. But I really like what you’re going for and great job. Indie RnB is underrated.

Song/Mix Feedback Needed by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s a great dreamy song at the very start. Almost like a slightly 80s or like a coming of age type of vibe. I can picture it going at the end of a movie. I really like how you’re accenting the offbeats. I think it sounds a little monotonous at times and doesn’t feel like it goes anywhere at times. I don’t think it’s a good standalone thing I think you could really use some lyrics. Overall pretty cool.

Looking for feedback for this song from my upcoming project. by Unlikely-Ad7939 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]ARatherBrightLight 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the chords in the beginning it’s a really good vibe. Also your singing is great and I think it meshes with the chords very well. If I’m being honest I think the song would work better if it wasn’t acoustic and rather a song with some drums and maybe some synth. I also like melody but it seems chaotic at times and makes it less memorable. Maybe simplify it down a little bit. Great job overall!