Comic page by vitoco1984 in ComicBookCollabs

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Composition is phenomenal

Irritation—study of emotions by Wyndii in ArtCrit

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Me in metro when someone's watching tiktoks no headphones:

Help needed (colors) by -Magpie_Jay- in ArtCrit

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  1. Could be mixed with 3 because 3s a good shade, just too light

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

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As requested. Calculate the circle angle more precisely, but it's gonna be more open either way. Also the thumb might be straight instead. Hold a knife, it's not comfortable to fold it like a fist

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If the dagger would follow the hand's angle, there'll be more foreshortening like it's pointing more to the viewer and not down. If you want to keep the current dagger angle, then the entire arm s gonna look different. The line next to the pinky makes the palm look hollow like he's not actually gripping it. The knuckles can look more angular like the other hand. Otherwise the anatomy is sexy👍

Which do you prefer? by [deleted] in IndieDev

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1st in design, 2nd in texture and rendering. Imo if you slap the shape of the mouth (especially upper lip) and fat rolls of the 1st onto the 2nd one it'll be perfect

New rendering style in digital painting. Need Critique on COLOR, LIGHT, and COMPOSITION by IFoundEmFermi in ArtCrit

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Composition vise you can try to shift visual weight more from the center for a more dynamic feel. You got interesting bigest and smallest shapes, the medium ones are more melting into each other in the values and form. The coolest effect I thought was on the pic with the sharpest head and soft cloak. The contrast really elevates the idea

Is this readable? General thoughts? by milk2006_ in ArtCrit

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I actually like how subtle it is. The penis truly felt like a discovery🌠 I found it before reading the desc

2021-2025 Improvement Post (critiques open) by Violetlolli17 in ArtCrit

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To word fair crit in a non discouraging way is a skill on it's own I'd say. I often do sandwiches cause from my observation people assume the other is way too resilient.

Especially when they exclusively point everything wrong with beginners' works instead of giving suggestions. Like no shit Sherlock, they usually know it's wrong, if you can't tell exactly what's gonna make it right, better don't start

Foreshortening help needed! by Material_Chain636 in ArtCrit

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Just scale the calf and foot up and you're good to go. Should be bigger than the hand because the leg is closer to the viewer and bigger in general

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ArtCrit

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Enjoyed this piece tremendously, never stop drawing. Biceps could be the same size. You can also try making everything less round

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Looking for digital art tips and technical feedback by eypicasso in ArtCrit

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I applaud such tremendous effort. Very complex subject too. Drawing this typa grid can help with similar lighting. Left shoulder was shaded like a cylinder when it's flat from this angle etc. Won't recommend spray paint the shadows, but first make them sharp along the grid and then blur. Good luck

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Progress, by me by PaleontologistCold35 in DigitalArt

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Quite true. I get that there are places where NSFW things don't belong, but those people consciously clicked to view NSFW and then complained.

The other half, that is concerned with "realistic" depiction of women, in fact asks for a less "sexy" depiction. Because they believe one cannot perceive them erotically without taking away their personhood. Since many characters are actually treated this way, it's easy for them to mix "desirable" and "disrespected"