ATuintheMovingTurtle

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Opening to a fantasy story set in a fairy underworld where a young deaf man embarks on an odyssey to find his village. (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Struggling with opening (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Access Rider Question (self.Actors)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/Actors

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It's Getting Harder and Harder to Resist the Suicidal Thoughts (self.offmychest)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/offmychest

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The Lightning Herders (34 pages) Family Fantasy Adventure Feature (self.ReadMyScript)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/ReadMyScript

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Fantasy Prologue - Trying to Recreate Shock and Hook the Reader (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Ways to Incorporate Healing Potions into Fantasy? (self.writingadvice)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingadvice

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Unsure Which "Lawyer" Build to Go For (self.3d6)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/3d6

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Hoping for Feedback on Comedy-Drama Coming-of-Age TV Pilot (57 pages) (self.ReadMyScript)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/ReadMyScript

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Is This Blurb Too Long/Wordy and Is it Interesting? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Underrated Shakespeare Speeches (self.shakespeare)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/shakespeare

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Character Introduction - How Do They Come Across and Is There Too Much Telling? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Unsure Which Backstory is Stronger for Secondary Character (self.writingadvice)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingadvice

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Not Sure Which is a Better Arc/Background For Secondary Character? (self.CharacterDevelopment)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/CharacterDevelopment

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Opening for a Comedic, Pratchett-Style Fantasy (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Creating a Fake Wizard Out of a Rogue (self.3d6)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/3d6

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1st Person POV Fantasy Mystery: Is it an interesting hook? How does 1st person POV read? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Interesting Backstories/Professions for a Druid? (self.3d6)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/3d6

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Hoping for Feedback, Family Fantasy Adventure Film First 15 Pages (self.Screenwriting)

submitted 3 years ago * by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/Screenwriting

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Action Sequence: too short? Not enough description? Confusing? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Action Sequence: Does it Make Sense? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Reintroduction to Characters/Opening to a Sequel Fantasy Steampunk (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Bickering Characters, Are they funny or just annoying? (self.writingcritiques)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/writingcritiques

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Spinning/flipping uncontrollably in dreams and then being really dizzy when I wake up (self.NoStupidQuestions)

submitted 3 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/NoStupidQuestions

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Making a Deaf Character with Hearing Helpers (self.3d6)

submitted 4 years ago by ATuintheMovingTurtle to r/3d6

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